Reviews for A Day At The Beach
Spongeman chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Can you send me the other version maybe Pm ing me would work best. So I don't have to post my e-mail on the internet.
sonserae89stinson chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
oh yeah, i want the grown up version. email-
Demon chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
CAn you send me the other version please I love this one awnd want to read the real thing

Alanna chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
So, like everybody else, I too would like the *other* version sent, please. What I read so far was really good.
summer chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
its was great could you e-mail me the other version of the story thanks a bunch

U ROX chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
please send me the dirty version! :), its a good story
Summer-Breeze-171 chapter 1 . 11/5/2005

This is awesome! I loved this so much so I'm really interested in the other version. Please send it to me at :

Thanks in advance!

Post soon! S-B-171
Simone chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Can you send me the other version. I really liked your story.
monster-in-the-closet chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
that was hot i loved it, can you send me the original version?
California-Dreaming chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Like it...

Can you send me the other version?
J chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
i think it was a cool story. can send me the extended version please?

Fanfiction Fan15 chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Hey really liked the story, um my e-mail is hope you can send me the other version of the story.
Lucie Brody chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
I'm too lazy to sign in.

Can you email the other version to me.
cinnamonscars chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
I really liked this story and I really hope that you continue this story! I would love it if you could email the real story to me. Thanks!
ocobsessedrachel2 chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
oh i liked it! just so you know, once you rate it M, anythin can be posted on fanfic. so feel free to get graphic! lol. i'll be waiting for an update cuz i really liked this! :) well... i hope you updaye it, lol. email me at for the other one! i want to see it!
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