Reviews for Demonic Kingdoms
shelwyn chapter 7 . 9/27/2007
ok
shelwyn chapter 6 . 9/27/2007
ED! oops forget the WE aT THE BEGINING...
shelwyn chapter 5 . 9/27/2007
Bang Bang BANGBANG BANG lol im bored intresting and where did ash go?
shelwyn chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
the cliffhangers make me not want to read it lol
shelwyn chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
Marona's gonna make the biggest mistake in her entire life

Ash,... Marona... no this isent rated M... lol
shelwyn chapter 2 . 9/27/2007
yea jasmine and haze are like 8 years older than ash thats why they had marona she was 5 when they died and ash was like 18 they were around 23 if they were the same age as ash jasmin would have been pregnant at like 12 had her at around 13 and thats not right...
shelwyn chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
thats a nice chapter its ok lots of ways for this to go
PB chapter 6 . 5/3/2006
How about making a chapter so we're sure you aren't dead?

...I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
General Badaxe chapter 6 . 4/30/2006
i figured the fic wasn't dead, but thanks for telling mr why you weren't updating
Blu Rose chapter 6 . 2/12/2006
Nice to know you aren't dead. I was beginning to wonder when you'd update. Anyway, hope you win your FF contest and that you update soon as you can!
Lacto3.1415 chapter 5 . 1/7/2006
Wow...nice chapter.

I WANNA FIGHT A LEVEL 50 BAAL! Hey, if Baal is naturally at level 40 and his prinny at 60, then would his prinny become 70? Wow...

Prier! She does rock...totally.

Hm...could Baal have become a random lv 50 because of the Dark Assembly? Heh heh, always check for that one...

Now off with Baal and on with...other things.

Marona: What other things?

Flonne: Uh...

Update soon!
Lacto3.1415 chapter 4 . 1/7/2006
"Prinny:The most feared person and overlord of them all,Baal is back!

Laharl:Aw dammit!There goes my Terror Title!"

*ROFL*

Laharl: ...

Laharl vs. Laharl...or Laharl vs Laharl and Laharl...I think I've had that before...creepy.
Angelus-alvus chapter 5 . 1/4/2006
Good chapter
Blu Rose chapter 5 . 1/3/2006
NYA! Prier! I haven't played La Pucelle, but from what I've read, she's like the female equivalant of Laharl. (Ooh. Scary.) Hope you update soon!
Angelus-alvus chapter 4 . 12/21/2005
Please don't let Marona die. Update soon.
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