Reviews for Uncommon Law
MrGravia chapter 9 . 11/15/2005
Dear god, not monkeyshines!
magnilan chapter 9 . 11/15/2005
Hooyah! Love it, a lot. Can't wait to see the rest of it. Although that has to depend on sarge signing my leave form.
Ghost140 chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
heh heh sweet
Dar Sel'La chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
And the plot thickens once again. Well there are two ways this can go. One is it blows up in thier faces and everybody is miserable. The other is that they call off the deal as he cant choose either one over the other. Technically there is the third option that it goes down as planned, but when does it ever happen that way? Here is why, its dull. Well, any way it works out should be intresting to read.
Bobboky chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
so are any of the other girls gonna get a peice of the action or are you going to hold it to just these three?

i hope that Rei does get a jump on things. I wonder though, is it possible for girls to petition the courts to get married to a fertile and nice guy? whether it is a random guy chosin by the courts or one the girls selected herself
obsidian-fox chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
lol. It's turning into a bit of a Shinji harem... a little odd for such a shy guy.
NefCanuck chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
Good gravy, what hath Rei wrought? Misato *&* Asuka are coming after Shinji hell bent on settling thiings, can Rei's "home" take the impact of the blast to come? ;)

GReat stuff, awaiting next chapter eagerly
vic chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
it was free of most errors, but shinji is so screwed, either in a VERY good way, or a very very bad way... i can't wait to see how this bet ends. see ya next chapter
Nabeshin Danbei Ayanami chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
Oh you little *. You are such a tease. I would have just LOVED it if Shinji at least got a little flustered before anything major happened, not complete avoidance... maybe it's my own fantasies talking but... o!
Andy chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
dundundun! I take it this is the main part of the plot.
tomdj1701 chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
Great one, hope to see more of this one soon.
SkyMaiden chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
Another amazing story from u. this story is just so entertaining and hilarious. i laughed so many times i cant even stand straight, or type right for that matter. You must update soon, this is one of the best evangelion stories i ever read.

I dont know who i want Shinji to end up with, maybe Rei or misato. anywayz update soon. every chapter is always interesting, and this one was no exception.

Sky Maiden
Big DMT chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
Wait... I don't get it.

If Asuka convinces Shinji to stay married to her, then Misato will end Asuka's marriage with Shinji?

That... doesn't make sense. I could understand if Asuka at the end of it still wanted the marriage ended so that she could claim to have an active choice in the matter, and fix her name, but I can't see her willingly abandoning Shinji *after* getting him to love her-if she was willing to hurt him like that, she would have told the judge that she hated him and never gotten that far. The situation is quite different from Truth Or Dare, where she was backed up against a wall with her pride at stake and the only requirement was for Shinji to kiss her, not ask her to stay married to him forever.

Other than that little hang-up, I'm enjoying the story so far.
AzureSky123 chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
Great chapter. Can't wait to see Rei's preemptive strike.
Xenriel chapter 9 . 11/14/2005
Oh, man is this amusing. Hahahaha! You have to update soon. Ha!
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