Reviews for Uncommon Law |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dear god, not monkeyshines! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hooyah! Love it, a lot. Can't wait to see the rest of it. Although that has to depend on sarge signing my leave form. |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh heh sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the plot thickens once again. Well there are two ways this can go. One is it blows up in thier faces and everybody is miserable. The other is that they call off the deal as he cant choose either one over the other. Technically there is the third option that it goes down as planned, but when does it ever happen that way? Here is why, its dull. Well, any way it works out should be intresting to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so are any of the other girls gonna get a peice of the action or are you going to hold it to just these three? i hope that Rei does get a jump on things. I wonder though, is it possible for girls to petition the courts to get married to a fertile and nice guy? whether it is a random guy chosin by the courts or one the girls selected herself |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. It's turning into a bit of a Shinji harem... a little odd for such a shy guy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good gravy, what hath Rei wrought? Misato *&* Asuka are coming after Shinji hell bent on settling thiings, can Rei's "home" take the impact of the blast to come? ;) GReat stuff, awaiting next chapter eagerly |
![]() ![]() it was free of most errors, but shinji is so screwed, either in a VERY good way, or a very very bad way... i can't wait to see how this bet ends. see ya next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh you little *. You are such a tease. I would have just LOVED it if Shinji at least got a little flustered before anything major happened, not complete avoidance... maybe it's my own fantasies talking but... o! |
![]() ![]() dundundun! I take it this is the main part of the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great one, hope to see more of this one soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing story from u. this story is just so entertaining and hilarious. i laughed so many times i cant even stand straight, or type right for that matter. You must update soon, this is one of the best evangelion stories i ever read. I dont know who i want Shinji to end up with, maybe Rei or misato. anywayz update soon. every chapter is always interesting, and this one was no exception. Sky Maiden |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait... I don't get it. If Asuka convinces Shinji to stay married to her, then Misato will end Asuka's marriage with Shinji? That... doesn't make sense. I could understand if Asuka at the end of it still wanted the marriage ended so that she could claim to have an active choice in the matter, and fix her name, but I can't see her willingly abandoning Shinji *after* getting him to love her-if she was willing to hurt him like that, she would have told the judge that she hated him and never gotten that far. The situation is quite different from Truth Or Dare, where she was backed up against a wall with her pride at stake and the only requirement was for Shinji to kiss her, not ask her to stay married to him forever. Other than that little hang-up, I'm enjoying the story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Can't wait to see Rei's preemptive strike. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, man is this amusing. Hahahaha! You have to update soon. Ha! |