Reviews for Uncommon Law
Xenriel chapter 8 . 11/8/2005
Hm. Well that was interesting. Interesting indeed...
Lord Splattergore chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
WAFF at its best. Remember kiddies, when it's Randomized, it's Maximized.
Shiakou chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
Cliffhanger! Evil, evil Random! Do not torture us so!
hawker-748 chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
Yes, there's a lot of WAFF, but why do I get the feeling that this story is at a tipping point?

If it goes one way, we will have a light-hearted romp that leaves the reader feeling better.

The other way, and this jumps right into 'Lifespan' country, and everyone gets hurt.

Great work so far, regardless of how it plays out.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Oh, is Misato's old friend Kaji, Ritsuko, or Jack Daniels?
Berserker1 chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
Okay, you call it cliche, you call it overdone plot, and you're right. But you're skilled enough at writing to still hook me in. I gotta admit, I tried reading this with a closed jerk-off mindset, and it just didn't work. I've never been good at pointing out what people are good at, but you're obviously doing something right, dude.;D
Andy chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
whoa, awkward. and you can't be a perv unless you daydream about Eva lemons. *daydreaming* m Asuka.. *slaps himself* not now perv!
rgreat chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Do not add Kaji, pretty please.

I think you have enough characters already.

Do not need to make it a total mess... ;)
tomdj1701 chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
Keep it up.
Dayz chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
Great chapter!

I'm in much need of more! :)

Oh and LOL for Hawk! heh
WarpWizard chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
Ooh, the seriousness descends...
vic chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
hawk is soo right... not that being a perv is a bad thing
ButcherBlues chapter 7 . 11/7/2005
I find it disturbing that Rei favors marriage with Gendo. *shudders* Apart from that, your story's great! I like the Shinji/Misato pairing. Be waiting for ch. 9!

Good day!
Shekron Kaizar chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
Random thought...

(Scene in a confession box)

Priest: what is your problem daughter?

Misato: I... I am having sinful thoughts...

Priest: Peace with you. What may they be...?

Misato: I think... I think I'm in love with my husband (sob)

Priest: By the father, son and... eh? What did you say?

Misato: (sob) I think I love my husband... and... and I think he loves me! (cry)

Priest: Umm... well... err

Misato: I can't believe I'm even thinking that I'm in love with my husband! It's so wrong! (cry)He actually KISSED me! KISSED ME! His WIFE! Can you believe that?

Priest: (Scratching head) Well.. I do not think your situation is at all... serious, per say...

Misato: We're in love and we're married! I can't believe it! We weren't meant to fall in love! (wah)I DON'T WANT TO MARRY HIM IF I LOVE HIM! WAH!

Priest: Someone call security please.

Misato: I can't take it anymore! I want a divorce (sob) on the grounds that I like my husband...

Happy Writings!
GKathellar chapter 8 . 11/7/2005
Wow...this is getting kind of weird.

...

GETTING?
Bobboky chapter 8 . 11/6/2005
nice
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