Reviews for Uncommon Law
Mono chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Thinking about it I don't think Misato ever told Shinji that she couldn't have children. Am I really wrong on this one? Reading too many fics these past 6 years...
Dar Sel'La chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Yea, that is a scary thought. 'Encouraged' to have children...with Misato...that just cannot end well. I am surprised that they would care too much about it, though. I mean they are they are the ones who forced the whole situation on them in the first place. God, I can only imagine what Kaji is going through, with both Misato and Ritsuko hitting on Shinji most every chance they get, only to have the Red Headed Devil herself throwing herself at him. Dont you love Karma?
Chineseboy13 chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Man, This is cool.
NefCanuck chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Dear god this is a c*razy* fic. Y'know I wonder what would have happened if say Shinji's marriage to Asuka was still legal? Bets on Shinji lastng the rest of the day after Asuka finds out? LOL

Great stuff and awaiting next chapter eagerly :)
Ghost140 chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
World domination huh? I thought your master plan involved flying monkeys for all or something along those lines. :P
Zoro50 chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Another cool fic Random. I like the premise of this one. Keep writing and i'll keep reading.
peskykid chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
That was GOOD! Your humour is ace! Keep it up!
hawker-748 chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Oh yeah...

Nice and light, just what the doctor ordered. Almost expected to see Kaji do a Peter Pan off of the EVA cages in shame.

Keep up the production rate, I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
tomdj1701 chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Funny, loved the judge.

Please update soon.
Innortal chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
You might want to replace him turning fourteen to fifteen, since he was fourteen when he arrived, and sufficient time to have passed would have turned him at least fifteen.

Other than that, great work. It looked perfect otherwise. Looking forward to more.

Innortal
vic chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
dude... this is the pest peice of Waffy humor i have ever come across! the humor must be the central peice to it, and serious moments must lead to more humor... like in this chapter. this is an amazing story man, keep it up!
Kraven Ergeist chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Wow...this was smeggin' hilarious!

One question pertaining to the legalese, thou - Shinji and Asuka became technically "married" two months or so after he and Misato were technically "married." Now, I fully appreciate the fact that, by introducing the spontaneous inadvertent marriage concept between Shinji and Asuka before suddenly shifting it to Shinji and Misato, one can make the whole concept seem a lot less conjured and arbitrary than it actually is (Come on, sudden discovering that you're "married" to Misato? How convenient is THAT?), but are you so sure the Tokyo-3 legal system would overlook Shinji's marriage to Misato as to set up Shinji and Asuka as a married couple as well? It seems a bit incompetent, even for Tokyo-3, which, we all know, is more incompitent than most, but still!

Anyway, aside from that questionable tweak via artistic liscence (Please note: a perfectly acceptable tweak!), this fic was fun and enjoyable. Having Ritsuko and Misato fight over Shinji had me in stiches! Now, if only there was some way to get the rest of the female cast more invovled. Asuka is already somewhat meshed in, but if you could somehow twist in Rei, Hikari, and heck, even Maya all together, this would turn into one HELL of a fic.

Looking forward to more chapters! Keep up the good work!
shinji the good sharer chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
nice, update soon.

ikari shinji
gunman chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
Nice to see you can update quickly and still keep a sense of the mood and tone of your stories.
WarpWizard chapter 4 . 10/20/2005
You're still making me smile. You missed a good opportunity for a quick moment of Misato/Shinji WAFF during the "trial" though.
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