Reviews for Uncommon Law
AzureSky123 chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
Great chapter.

I find this sentence strange.

“We’re don’t-”

I think “We’re not-” is better.

Keep it up.
Ikari666 chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
This is getting to be quite the amusing read.

The humor, the entertaining dialogue, the sabotage against your fellow writer... it's all good. _
hawker-748 chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
Ritsuko VS. Misato!

Round One!

FIGHT!

This is a wonderful tonic after the angst-arama of 'Aoi'.

Short chapters are all right, if they are this good.

'Wait, maybe we've been married since she moved in...' that line, along with the line in chapter two about not sleeping together, just being married, causing millions of men to sneeze... Classic. Some of the best lines I've ever read in fanfiction.

Bring on the next chapter, NOW!

Not that I'm pushing, or anything...
tomdj1701 chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
Good chapter Random, looking forward to the next one.
Shekron chapter 2 . 10/17/2005
Error? Link not found? Argh! What gives? I was SO looking forward to chapter3! Please put it up soon! I'm addicted to it already!

Happy Writings!
BrotillaTheHun chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
As cliche as you think this story may be, this is still damn hillarious. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Shinji just keeps digging himself deeper and deeper into a hole...and he's not even trying to dig! I can't WAIT to see how Ritsuko and Misato affect Shinji. Keep up the good work!
Dar Sel'La chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
Oh god, misato is playing with him again. This just cant end well. Substance is always a good thing, so no worries here. Poor poor Maya, she knows not what she hears. This is an intresting take on a Misato/Shinji pairing, but I do wonder how things are going to play out between her, Shinji and Auska.
shinji the good sharer chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
hahaahahaaha! nice!

ikari shinji
Innortal chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
Still very funny. Liked Asuka's suggestion for Shinji.

Love the little banter going between Misato and Ritsuko.

Looking forward to more.

Innortal
Lord Raa chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
Fantastic stuff you have here.

I eagerly await the next installment.
Ghost140 chapter 3 . 10/17/2005
good chap
rgreat chapter 2 . 10/16/2005
lol, finally some fun in the ocean of angst... :)

You can count me reading.
vic chapter 2 . 10/15/2005
auska is being mean, tricking shinji like that... but it is really funny to read is a good fic, and to be honest, i haven't seen any like it. and i have been reading fics for more than five years now. keep up the good work random
obsidian-fox chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
It has a long way to go... but I'll read what comes next.
Shiakou chapter 2 . 10/14/2005
No-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o!

Not another fic that'll get me hooked to the PC for days! This is torture!
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