true the ideas been used a lot, but hey, I hate to admit it but your Random! The King of Evangelion fanfiction! so I'm sure you can make it work. and already it's getting good.

Just finished reading chapter 2 and I have to admit this is

1-a pretty mean thing to do to Shinji since he is being used and getting the short end of the stick,

2-funny in the sense that this whole marriage thing is legal, and

3-totally true to Shinji's character in that he is willing to help someone else out despite what it costs him both physically and mentally.

I just hope that this doesn't cause Shinji to take the suicide-option-because-he-is-being-used-for-anothers-benefits kind of deal.

And by the way, will Shinji and Misato stay together after this or will they get a divorce? It seems much more likely than a Shinji-Asuka marriage.

Short, but interesting diaologuse with Asuka. I actually thought she was serious at first...or maybe that's me thinking she'd ask me that. Meh.

Anyway, as long as there's around 10 words a chapter, I'm happy, but it's not like you're writing to please me. Heh. Enjoy.

This is still funney, a bit more than the last chapter actually. I liked when shinji unplugged his laptop to avoid thoes e-mails. lol

Cliched it may be, but that dosn't stop it being fun. please continue, its been a while since you posted a funny EVA fic adn this breaks up the serious nature of Folded wings nicely

Misato has finally figured out that this whole mess could poss some serious problems with Kaji. Should be very interesting to see how the two react from here on in.

brindani

awesome. I can't wait for things to get disasterous.

I have to admit, that is an intresting image Auska presents. It probably is best that she wasnt there for roll call though, it most likely would have gotten ugly. The roll call scene was pretty funny though. Read that line and started laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair. It will be amusing to see what else fate can do to mess with thier minds. I have a feeling that Shinji and Misato are not going to get devorced though. Oh god, Kaji is going to go ballistic. That thought it hilarious.

Nice job Random, things are getting good. Can't wait for more.

All I could do was laugh when I read this one... Asuka was so cool and evil at the same time. It was great!

Interesting, I saw a change in pace with the entire school finding out. I liked it.

Very nice. A great addition, and his life just keeps sinking deeper. I wonder what Rei will do.

LOL

Innortal

LOL!

Asuka actually came up with a good one.

MWAHAHAHHAHA! I LOVE THIS STORY! and use your forums! *bops you* :-P

ikari shinji

Ha ha, simple and funny, I like it. :)