Reviews for Uncommon Law
dennisud chapter 2 . 10/11/2005
Ahh... A funny fic!

Great too many somber and 'dark' ones out latesly.

We haven't heard from Gendo or Ayanami. I wonder why?

migele chapter 2 . 10/11/2005

I'm for Rei nagging and questioning the marriage. Kaji *gg* make him jealous or something...
Shekron Kaizar chapter 2 . 10/11/2005
Changing the name was a great touch, especially in the start of class! You make me want to read the Love Hina story you mentioned, though I'll probably wait for this one to end! I'm actually very new to evangelion (VERY), so your fic helps me grasp the charachters better.

Happy Writings!
GKathellar chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
I'm confused ... is it SM or SA?
Nabeshin Danbei Ayanami chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
I find this fic VERY amusing. I hope you already have quite a few chapters of this already done to update.I know some authors like to either finish a story or have a ton of already done chapters ready before they post them. I have prolly 200 pages of Ranma fiction I have yet to post(I think my Hina fans would get mad at my lack of update for a year,yet coming out with other fanfiction)...I haven't done it before. Oh, and to let you know if I don't get around to review it, I read the 18th chapter of folded wings too. I probably read some others I forgot too. I read ALL your eva fiction, and need to check out your old hellsing. I'm just lazy, I'm lucky to have 2 hrs a day to myself.
haydn chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
lovely piece, please run with it:)
TheKerghan chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Yes I'll have to agree with you that this plot has been overused quite substantially. But so far so good, you've a very healthy dosage of humour going on in the story and I'm pleased as always with your work even if this one is a little different from what you normally write. Keep it up.

Cheers Ghostblade.
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Very cute.
Andy chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
original, no. lovable and familiar, yes. but what is the pairing going to be? awaiting updates, as always, quite eagerly.
Aaronmizuno chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Even reused themes are a joy to read when the author constructs them well.

There's already enough set up that I'd be looking forward to seeing more. I hope you continue it...
Priest chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Oh, this one you have got to continue. this looks to be a very funny/interesting series of events. As always keep up the wunderfull work.
daniel-gudman chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
You know, you could have a summary that just said, "This Is Rat Piss!" and we'd all still enthusiastically read it because your reputation is so good.

And, well, this is pretty good, too. I'll be interested to see where it goes.
JWM chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Heh, amusing. I like the way you use this idea. Please keep writing.
Ainigmatikos chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Hawk's Love Hina Version was hilarious lol ahh... good laughs. .

I presume that this fic will be more of a humorous nature (should you choose continue it) than your other fics. This fic, despite what its final length may be, only seem to be an one shot. I'm not sure how chaotic you can make an eva fic based on this content without throwing things out of context though. Some things seemed a little incredulous as well, such as Misato's unintentional disregard for that letter... it's like "Hmm... so I'll be married to Shinji for the next few months. Disregarding our age difference and the demoralizing effects that this may cause to our reputation and subsequently, our ego, I think I can get some extra cash out of this. Ah well, I'll think about it some other time, gotta finish my paperwork first. Not like marriage is such a big deal or anything, especially if it's so abrupt as this. Shinji can know later. Hmm... now where did I put my beer..." I realize that Misato would never say that or think it but it does illustrate my point. For the sake of humor though, I guess some things are a neccessity and things doesn't necessary have to make sense.

Also, unless you're planning to NOT incorporate some mishap when Asuka attempts to revoke the so said "marriage" in the near future, perhaps it will be more beneficial to the plot development of this fic if you added something towards the end of the chapter so it won't end on "Misato and Shinji simply had no idea how mean it could be." However, this is only if you DO decide to have Asuka play more of a main role in this. If not, by all means, continue on!

Shekron Kaizar chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Doing it for the payroll, yep, that sounds like Misato. Can Shinji be accused of polygyny? I think this is a great original piece.

Happy Writings!
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