Reviews for Uncommon Law |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great Shinji is still a spineless loser, Asuka is still a domineering bitch. Frankly while Misato might be hot, the very fact that she is twice his age, and is probably loose as hell, don't really make her wife material. A one night stand, yes, lifelong partner? Hell NO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. The jokes, the craftiness of the girls, the twists and the finale. I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy now. Much appreciated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very funny, romantic, interesting story. Somehow, it never occurred to me to wonder how Shinji might feel about Ritsuko being intimate with his father. Or how Rei might feel about it, to be perfectly honest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhahahah.. loved it. Truly funny stuff, and even had a sappy ending to boot :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story left me feeling a bit uncertain at first. But it warmed up to me really quick like. Tu eres un muy bueno escritorio. Translation: You're a great writer. A lot of people feel the need to make Misato younger in fics like this and while those stories can be extremely good I like that you didn't. I get why some people are uncomfortable with the large age gap. For me it just makes the pairing that much more exciting. I guess I either have a think for older women or I'm submissive. Anyways I'm glad that you didn't feel the need to integrate the old unit 01 turned Misato into a teenager plotline. True love transcends all barriers including age. Well unless the kid is like 10 or something. Anyways thank you for one helluva ride. -P4L |
![]() ![]() ![]() ending was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Usually I'd give a longer comment, but really - most of your stories are so well written and proofread that there's not much to say, so I'll just enjoy the work. Still... “You know,” he said slowly, “when I asked if she was still wild in bed… I was kidding.” is truly the BEST. LINE. EVER. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At times I had trouble discerning whether you were serious at all with this story, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. There were some truly fun moments here as well. Thanks for the read. Moonlith |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, great story! Fun and playful. Great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah it's silly... but it's really amusing silly, so it's good. The real question now is how long it will be until Asuka wants back in, possibly including others until Shinji is the star of his very own Big Love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn. does Random1377friggin genius? this was pure hilarity and awesome twists made perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is still an awsome fic:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG... OMFG... Can't, stop, laughing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this story many times. I've always loved it, but never reviewed it for some reason. All, I can really say is THIS WAS GREAT! (everything else has already been said) Also, regarding the population debate (the real reason I finally reviewed despite having read this story several times these past couple years), I don't see how "underpopulation" would ever really be a problem in the first place. I mean, the less people in the world, the better. |