I like. I liked the ending especially.

ROLFLMAO hahahahahahahaha!

ikari shinji

lol. It's better than gum wrappers.

That was great.

I don't care if you think it was cliche, it was stil great! And I happen to like cliche, thank you.

There's a rule that goes simply "Eva Characters Awkward Situations Loads Of Laughs," and I think this one is a prime example of this.

I loved it.

Did Gendo and Ritsuko ever live together? Well, it works I guess.

Anyway another great story.

i was SO CONFUSED by the ending that i read it three times, and finally got it. that was a beautiful ending right there. thanks for this wonderful work of fiction.

I think it might be Rits spends so much time with the Commander that they've now been legally married.

Regardless, good stuff, Random.

That was a great ending to a thoroughly entertaining story.

I salute you!

OK let me see if i get this: Because of the law Ritsu is now married to Misato so then that makes her Shinji's Step mother? ...But then...er...I thought that would mean she Shinj's 2nd wife...no wait that cant be right...bah im not really familer on how marrige changes the relations to other family members. Any ways this fic was a nice piece of work good stuff.

That was Brilliant, Funny and very caring. So Misato won and Ritsuko did as well. I guess in this sort of story I can agree with that.

Plus what a great ending. I wonder do the 'new' marriage laws pertain to guardianship? I mean then Rei ould be Ritsu's daughter and by law Shinji's sister!

Oh ho that feels so ... unique!

dennisud

In the car, driving from NERV "umm... Shinji?"

"Yeah Misato?"

"I have good news and some... uhh... some 'suprising' news!" she says nervously. "What do you want first?"

"Umm... the 'suprising' news... I guess..."

"Okay... ahem... One of us is pregnant..."

(After a brief re-lapse)"And the good news?" he says shakily.

"It's not you." she smiles.

(GROOAAN)

Sorry, couldn't resist! Great story! By far the funniest and most entertaining I have ever read! Good luck with colledge.

Happy Writings!

Ha! Good ending. Had enough WAFF and laughs to keep me satisfied.

But now it's over... ;_;

Error check:

"laughing with delight Ritsuko let out a defeated groan"

as Ritsuko let out a defeated groan

Golden. An Eva story with a light easy tone that works in a way that Gainax would just love. *applause*

You're stories crazy! Crazy! It's hard to find words other than that to describe Uncommon Law...it's just...just...crazy! The hilarious dialogue and chaotic scenarios combined with your natural talent for writing creates one of the funniest, most enjoyable reads I've had in a long time. Terrific stuff!

I dont know about "not a threat", after all she does care for him enough to voice her disspleasure if he got hurt.