|Reviews for Le Petit Chat|
| ehm chapter 5 . 12/11/2015
This is a breathe of fresh air, and yes (tired as you are from hearing this) this is a beautiful fic. It's full of emotion, and I liked how you were able to draw out the creativeness in my mind. I can really see the story in an art which would probably have Severus inner artist run for his money.
I cant help but notice your run-ons tho. Not that I dislike such sentences, but you could do with more commas. Dear, good choice of words is one thing, but please dont hesitate to use commas and periods. I feel like this story would be more refreshing if you knew where to pause in your sentences.
With the inner critic in me aside, I feel like this is a great work still. I do hope to hear more from you :) (now lemme check your other works lol)
| TheWaffleBat chapter 5 . 10/17/2015
I have no words to describe this.
| Exia chapter 5 . 10/5/2015
Wow. I mean...I just don't have any words. I want to be eloquent. To give you my awe in meter and rhyme. But you've stolen it all away with your story. It's just...fantastic. Thank you for this.
| Gwen.Xoloitzcuintle.Baggins chapter 5 . 4/19/2015
Hi! Reading this has been certainly moving. It was such a perfect story line, very well written and full of emotions. I am wondering if it's been translated to spanish, and if it hasn't, if you'd let me write it in spanish, giving you the whole credit, of course. I'll be waiting your answer.
| TheCauldron chapter 5 . 3/19/2015
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. *in awe of your emotive skills*
| marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
for me the summary sounds like what a creeper/pedophile would say
| Profesor chapter 5 . 11/21/2014
Really nice story. I love Spa-artist and his little cat.
| Moon Kingdom chapter 5 . 6/11/2014
I love it. You're a wonderful writer.
| Celesta SunStar chapter 5 . 3/27/2014
This is a nice story but the "Je suis Professeur Severus Snape." in chapter 2 just really bugs me. It should be 'Je m'appelle ...
| ilanit.harary chapter 5 . 2/17/2014
loved it! it touches your soul like so few do.
| lovelybones1029 chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
This is absolutely beautiful.
| ALiveTodaytoWrite chapter 5 . 1/18/2014
loved it such an interesting read.
| TheEutonyOfPetrichor chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Beautiful ! That's all I can say.
And thank you for writing something so beautiful !
| Katie-hime chapter 5 . 8/20/2013
This is a beautiful piece, and I sincerely hope that you are pleased with it and proud of it. The emotional depth that you've managed to convey in five chapters far exceeds most works I have read, many of which run dozens of chapters longer than this one. There is a poignant, despairing quality to your portrayal of Severus that is absolutely enthralling. My congratulations on a beautiful work!
| Nicole chapter 5 . 8/5/2013
This is just too beautiful for me to not leave a review. An art by itself :)