Reviews for The Person I Admire
Vishw chapter 5 . 3/19/2023
I don't think I can read anymore. All the crying and sobbing is a bit too much for my taste. First, there was Tsunade, then Sakura, who instead of showing happiness about Naruto coming back after 3 years, again made it about Sasuke. Then Hinata probably created a world record for a Hyƫga who cries the most. And now we have Naruto who lost it over his first kill. To be honest he would never simply kill disabled nins like this in the first place when he had no real reason to. And why is he still utterly clueless about romance despite spending three years with the super pervert? Canon made the same mistake which I never appreciated.
DoneyTheKage chapter 6 . 12/22/2020
*Sigh* I really thought you would have killed her off. Then the armbands that Naruto stored his chakra in came to save the day. This chapter is 1000/10 good work. AnyWAyeZE I want you to get back to doing this fic it's 2020 damn near 2021 almost 13 years!
yeaaaahhhh I read chapter 20 . 11/20/2020
oh lee swore thats a first literally most fanfics I read keeps him as a pure boy who can destroy mountains. this is actually a nice change of pace. it sucks all the GODLY fanfics are unfinished and or never get that sequel. with a few exceptions
Digiblade chapter 28 . 11/17/2020
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END LIKE THIS? PLEASE UPDATE SOMETIME SOON! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
Digiblade chapter 23 . 11/14/2020
When you said "yojne" I actually read it as
"yah-jeh-NAE"
Digiblade chapter 15 . 11/10/2020
sex I've ever read, but it was still good! 3, if ya know what I mean...
Digiblade chapter 8 . 11/9/2020
Dude. You. Are. Amazing. Rock music? Absolutely the perfect choice. Wow. This story is amazing!
Digibladr chapter 7 . 11/4/2020
R.I.P. Santa. Noice chapter, can't wait to read more about the Zenseigan and Hiraishin!
Digiblade chapter 6 . 11/4/2020
Dude. You are an amazing author. Wow.
Bluewarrior3 chapter 8 . 2/27/2020
Ehh im sorry but rock music? Arent they like in a time where they dont even have cell phones?. Your story isnt bad but there are just parts where i didnt like so much. Thank u for the story..
Bluewarrior3 chapter 6 . 2/26/2020
Im still reading your story and its going good so far. Tho some of the little fights naruto and hinata have are pretty quick . Like in the forest of death and the first exam fight. And when hinata confessed it wasnt as emotional as i thought it would be, maybe because i would assume There's an instructor for a reason, to stop the fight when it goes to far, i guess thats why? I think when you compare this to when she confessed in the "pain arc episode" you just cant compare them..anyways im still reading. By the way cute naruhina moments
*side note* Just letting you know i hope it doesnt seem like im bashing on your story.
234-5vw8n7y48mc5wt09uq09c8unm chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
Was "Tree House" referring to Takigakure? I remember that Taki, I at least in the anime, has a giant tree that the actual village is built on/in, I think.
wildcatwit chapter 28 . 6/3/2019
Ddduuudddeee! I need you to finish this lol I literally finished the story in two days and I am emotionally invested at this point lol
QueenDeadPool chapter 28 . 9/30/2018
I really liked this, great story, I just wish there was more.
Kingkong101 chapter 12 . 9/8/2018
It sucks
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