Reviews for The Person I Admire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *Sigh* I really thought you would have killed her off. Then the armbands that Naruto stored his chakra in came to save the day. This chapter is 1000/10 good work. AnyWAyeZE I want you to get back to doing this fic it's 2020 damn near 2021 almost 13 years! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh lee swore thats a first literally most fanfics I read keeps him as a pure boy who can destroy mountains. this is actually a nice change of pace. it sucks all the GODLY fanfics are unfinished and or never get that sequel. with a few exceptions |
![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END LIKE THIS? PLEASE UPDATE SOMETIME SOON! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() When you said "yojne" I actually read it as "yah-jeh-NAE" |
![]() ![]() sex I've ever read, but it was still good! 3, if ya know what I mean... |
![]() ![]() Dude. You. Are. Amazing. Rock music? Absolutely the perfect choice. Wow. This story is amazing! |
![]() ![]() R.I.P. Santa. Noice chapter, can't wait to read more about the Zenseigan and Hiraishin! |
![]() ![]() Dude. You are an amazing author. Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ehh im sorry but rock music? Arent they like in a time where they dont even have cell phones?. Your story isnt bad but there are just parts where i didnt like so much. Thank u for the story.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im still reading your story and its going good so far. Tho some of the little fights naruto and hinata have are pretty quick . Like in the forest of death and the first exam fight. And when hinata confessed it wasnt as emotional as i thought it would be, maybe because i would assume There's an instructor for a reason, to stop the fight when it goes to far, i guess thats why? I think when you compare this to when she confessed in the "pain arc episode" you just cant compare them..anyways im still reading. By the way cute naruhina moments *side note* Just letting you know i hope it doesnt seem like im bashing on your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was "Tree House" referring to Takigakure? I remember that Taki, I at least in the anime, has a giant tree that the actual village is built on/in, I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ddduuudddeee! I need you to finish this lol I literally finished the story in two days and I am emotionally invested at this point lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this, great story, I just wish there was more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It sucks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story cause it's awesome |