ive never fully read a story before this is the last chance before i go back to one shots

Nice chapter

Nice first chapter

GREAT CHAPTER !

Love it ! I think sakura should develope a crush for naruto just as he and hinata . . .

oh my gawd! the story is great so far... PLEASE update soon...

I just realized the last time you updated this was the year before I started high school, I'm in my first year of college now :/ Please finish this story it's a gold mine

i would just like to say that chapter 15 was very romantic and greatly ejoyed reading it.

okaaay, this is pretty good even counting the overly dramatic scenes. and the 'new rules' scene was hilarious. great chapter.

Afew things i need to say. Firstly, don't you think that naruto would already have had his first kills? he went training with jiraiya for 3 years! jiraiya would have definitely done something about it. And what if naruto had accidentally killed some of the people he challenged? i know you needed it for naruto/hinata interaction but seriously? it would have been understandable if it was hinata's first kill. Also, if i had to imagine tsunade, it wouldn't have been her crying due to some minor decisions, it would be her having bottles of sake lying around and proud of the idiot ninja (naruto) for finally getting somewhere with hinata.
-rant over thankyou for listening-
-first rant EVER!-

I loved this chapter as well as every other chapter in this story. I was just introduced to it recently by a friend and after I started reading I was barley able to stop finishing it all within three days. I have read most of your author notes and such as well and hope you continue to write this amazing story and eventually become a successful writer so I can follow your work. I saw that you were planning on postponing updating this story and I instantly became upset. This story had impacted me emotionally and really helped me through a rough time and as far as I thought was extremely well written. Please continue this story soon at least to the end. I would understand if you don't go through with the sequel but I would hate to see this amazing story go unfinished. I am not telling you to however just asking as a newly devoted fan. I will read your other works soon and I only hope they are as good and that this story will soon continue.

I'm just going to start off with a LOL because I did not realise that you were a guy who was writing this story until I read this chapter's Author Note which really made me laugh and just to confirm it I read your profile Rune in-case I was wrong hehe (I have gotten into a bad habit of assuming that mostly the female population posts stories here *sigh* I apologise, never again P ). Secondly I don't read many lemon filled stories however I clicked on this without looking at the rating because the summary was intriguing. Of course I realised too late that it was rated M haha nevertheless I will admit I have enjoyed this story so far. It is completely brilliant and has the perfect amount of detail, its not rushed, & I love the twists and turns. So once again this whole concept is just awesome, I will finish reading the story before I give you a better review! I don't think you have finished this story yet so I guess like everyone else I will have to wait too until you come back from dealing with the life stresses, something which I understand all too well! Anyway, au revior until my next review! D

Well that was...*Dramatic pause for the amount I'm blushing" interesting.
I like the story, and with the little "tidbits" you've added, well let's just say that made my "day"

this is good but the fourth Hokage is his father for real

Wow! Great story and great writing. You do a superb job with Naruto and Hinata. I love the cool original ideas here. Hinata and Naruto are now one with a Demon! I hope you will finish this sometime...even so...this is kind of an ending here. Thanks for sharing your writing:)