Reviews for Malevolence
great gospel chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Really intense. Great job of drawing out this scene and showing how the Turks truly care for one another. It was action-packed, detailed, and emotionally-driven. Well done.
Lord 0f Storms chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
thats such a lovely fic~ i really like good Tseng/Elena stories. nice one!
Spirit 4rcher chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
Very dramatic. This could be another reason why they were in the crater in the beginning. I never knew why, that's the only thing I never knew about AC; why they were there. This is very nice and detailed, I can see whats going on through the writing nicely. Nice job. :)
Neo-Nebula chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Wow. That. Was. Awesome. I am stunned. If SquareEnix decides to put that part in the complete Blu-ray disc version, I bet it will be very close to this. Excellent job. Very good detail and good job keeping the characters in character. I could see and hear this happening in my mind; something that I hardly get out of fanfictions. You have great potiential to become a great writer. I added this to my favorite stories list.
SapphireXSerpent chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
WOW. That was awesome...
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
WOW! That was great! The text had a tension to it unlike anything I've ever read before! This was unique! You rule!
Pishivee chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
THIS IS SO COOL! how very wonderful... i loved it so much. Why did you title it XIX? 29? what is that? but you paid so much attention to the detail, and since you really don't know what's going on down there in the movie, like when they shout Elena's name for example, it's cool that you made what was happening. anyway, really great job!
chibified kitsunes chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
awesome! that totally summarises what happened in the beginning! 3 enjoyed it tons!
shadows-of-flame chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
I LOVE this fic! :D It's so well written, and Tseng is just cute as ever the way he's looking out for Elena. Update soon please!
MyraHellsing chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
no~~! CLIFF-HANGER!~! . it's just getting interesting... -puppy eyes- plz write more! XD
O'Ylia chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
*cheers for next chapter* Excellently done! The way you described the action that takes place is something I've always wanted to do. And of course, Tseng's "I wasn't going to leave you" makes me grin. Wide. :D I'll be waiting for the second chapter to unfold. _ Ganbatte and thanks for the story!
Collarander the Unicorn chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Really good ficfic you got here! It fits in well with AC, but I just can't stop wondering, why is Tseng there? I thought Sephiroth killed him...? Meh, maybe it was just me.
JA-Japster chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Very nicely written. Your style of writing is very descriptive, and the fight scenes are incredibly well illustrated. I'd love to see where you take the story from here; whether you continue on from Elena and Tseng's perspective, or shift to maybe Vincent's as he rescues them.

Loved it. Great job!
SetsuntaMew chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Wow. I REALLY like this so far...amazing. You're so very talented and I LOVE it. Keep up the great work!
Yami Maleci chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
That's evil, you left a kick ass clifhanger! this is so much better then my Turks fic that I'm working on...please update soon...or I might die!

ja ne!

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