Reviews for 10 Leisurely Days
Kiluca1228 chapter 3 . 9/5/2009
awesome so far
Unhealthy Obsessions chapter 22 . 8/22/2009
Ok. now that's I've finally finished reading this beast (haha) I can give a better review.


You have such a talent in writing.. this sounds like it could be a script from the actual show. The characters were.. well, in character. The story was well-planned, and had some delightful twists and turns - very nice.

I love the relationships between these two couples.. and as I've already said, you've hit BB and Raven's personalities perfectly.. and they're so cute together!

Robin and Star as well.. it was so cute how they both felt the same way and yet thought the other didn't have the same feelings.

This was so perfect, I could see it as if I was watching an episode - voices, phrases and all.

The only problem I had with it was that your descriptions (although beautiful) were just a little repetitious. Like.. for example, your description of the ocean. Then again, its hard to find so many different words to describe the ocean.

So.. pretty much, this is one of the best works I've ever read. Onto reading more of your stories!

Keep it up! 3

Unhealthy Obsessions chapter 20 . 8/21/2009
Mmkay.. this story is amazing and I promised myself I wouldn't review it to the end but I love this chapter so much!

So I just wanted to say that. You write so well.. it's so believable.. they should make this an episode!

Anyways I have a request... you need to do a BBxRae fic sometime.. i love how you depict their relationship.. its so cute!
Hurley chapter 22 . 8/20/2009
Dude...This story rocks, man.
The Random Knuckle-head chapter 22 . 8/5/2009
if this work were to suck at anything it would have to be putting me to sleep! /:(

got meself stuck stayin awake till past five in the morning for three days in a row!
Havent done that since Deathly Hollows cameout!

S.M. Larsen chapter 22 . 7/22/2009
AMAZING, WONDERFUL story! It was beautiful in every way, and I'm glad I dedicated my morning to reading it! :)

DeathProofHero chapter 22 . 7/10/2009
One of the most well written stories I've ever read! very good job. you have a true gift for the English language. hope you're still writing nowadays.
Little Miss Juliet chapter 22 . 2/8/2009
First Robin/Starfire fic I've read in a long time that's now over cliche, too OOC or just plain...yuck.

This was VERY cute and Robin/Starfire is just adorable!

Keep it up!
Athwart Black chapter 22 . 11/21/2008
Thank you! I loved it all and read it in one sitting :)

BBxRae and RobxStar are my favorite couples and I love how you fitted them both in seamlessly

But by far, I think my favorite aspect of the story is how you fitted it right into the series; this sounds like it could actually happen. :) :) Very nice job
Riaaanna chapter 22 . 10/3/2008
hi i'm new to n i know it's not a really new story

but i read it n i like it

nice work! dramatic effects r cool...

if u're online n u wanna help me out around , it'll be much appreciated :)

nice story!
eclipsedsunrise chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
Dear blue ten,

I have finally found your story again. It took me a couple of years, but I did it. I found the story that brought me on to fanfiction. Yah. Thats right. your story was the one that introduced me to fanfiction. And for that I am forever thankful.

I found a link to this story cruising deviantart, I read it, then investigated this odd website. Not long after that I had an account. But I lost track of what happened to this story (the search system sucks). But I finally found it, and thought I should leave a review telling you not only how great it is, but how you brought me into a whole new and diffrent community outside of modding, gaming, community and conspiricy forums to this great place.

Great story by the way.
WeepingDeathAngel chapter 5 . 6/5/2008
I love it I can't wait to read more. This is a story is like a book you can't put down!
Hannah chapter 22 . 2/6/2008
Natalie9653 chapter 22 . 12/9/2007
Wow. I have to say that this story is definitely one of the best I've read. There's a lot of stories I've read, for a lot of subjects, but I rarely see one so well carried out as you did with this one. It's awesome. I honestly can't wait to read the other stories you've written. Good luck with future work!
Errant Wrath chapter 22 . 11/9/2007
I have actual tears in my eyes this was such a great fic and so cute! I absolutely love love loved loved it. I swear thats really not enough loves to describe how much I did love it but I don't think there would be enough room lol anyway I will just gush and bask in the greatness here for one moment before going to read another certain favorite from your list of sure to be fabulous stories. And by the way I must say the song you wrote aw! So perfect for them.

Your new fan,

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