|Reviews for Ugly Ducklings|
| Silver Chemist chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
That was nicely written.
I totally agree that sometimes people rely on Squall a lot, eventhough he is probably almost the same age or younger than them. One thing I really loved was how you stressed on some words using italics. That really gives a lot of emphasis. You do seem to manage second person point of view well.
So, overall really good job. Keep writing.
| Daniel Wesley Rydell chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Woah. Extremely woah.
| Neoneoneobanana chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Pretty interesting. Nice start.