Reviews for Setting Up House
MissBedouin chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
This was a great read, mainly because your writing is strong. I especially appreciated your choice of diction, using less-used adverbs like "religiously," etc. Also, your charecterization is top-notch. Raven, Gar, and Bart were handled extremely well, their dialouge was believable and touching, and it showcased their feelings without going soap-opera. That, and you snuck in some snicker-worthy lines-my favorites being "[Gar] couldn't hump something to death in battle," and of course, the last line.

There were some spelling errors however, and I saw one missing period. And in the beginning paragraph, I'd cut some of the details, so that there is a cleaner opening.

This story is wonderful, non-the-less. I appreciated how you made some of the words bold, like they routinely do in the comics. This is going into my favorites file.
mende5525 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Made my heart melt and burst with emotion.
onyx-worrystone chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
Aw! Very sweet.
pattie mayonnaise chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
It's been awhile since the last time I read this one-shot, and at that time I had added it to my favorites, but didn't review. So I was just looking through my list and saw it, and decided to read it again. And I STILL love it. And you definitely deserve a review for this! i don't even know why I didn't before. It's so well written. You ARE a writer. i know I'm being kind of redundant, but I'm just telling you! Originally, I had become a fan of Beast Boy and Raven together through the show, but soon after I became a bigger fan of the couple through the comic. Your story had something to do with that! very nice. just thought I'd tell you.
Angel Of Darkness513 chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
*hugs sleeping Bart* I love it
msdarling chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
i love her awkwardness

it's a great story
IGAF-kun chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
You did a great job on this fic. _ Keep up the good work!
eightroses chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Oh, wow. It was so very sweet and romantic in the last bit. I'd love to read more if you write more!
Gray Nameless chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
I loved this! It was very well written, very ni-character and very sweet, and funny too.

"I'm flattered. But I'm just content with your service as a pillow." _ hehe.

Great job! Keep it up!
OldArsenic chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Really great fic. I'd love to read more.
turq chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
interesting. slightly confused at first..but im guessing that this was written from the comics friend 'brit the mighty' was explaining to me rae and her bald head and everything. i really want to read the comics...but unfortunitly...getting my dad to take me to a store with books and such is difficult considering the closest store is roughly 30-45 minutes away. oh great writing though. even though im not really interested in bb/rae fics...i did enjoy it.
TouchOfViolet chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
This was so good! Beautifuly written. And the last line made me giggle.
iamhollywood chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
the dialogue and the description in this story was great. It actually felt real and the relationship didn't seem forced at all, great job!
K. A. Maples chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
*huggles the Bart with the Blackmail* I love your characterization of Raven, Beast Boy, and Kid Flash. Thank you for keeping them in character
DeTroyes chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Great story, please write more. We need more BB/R comic book fanfics!
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