Reviews for A broken Promise
kitti corpse chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
please write more, i have to know what happens next.
tntiggris chapter 2 . 12/28/2005
well this IS off to a good start so i hope to read more

ciaoo

~*~T of TNT
skimmie chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
love the story update would love to no whats up next
Kai's kitty chapter 2 . 10/10/2005
hey!that's intersting...update soon.
PandaPjays chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Aw! V. cute and sad and Kai better bloody well get his arse over to China and whap Rei over the head. Ok. I'm good. This was really well writen except for a few things. Sometimes the writing was a bit hard to follow because it changed from 3rd person to 1st and from past to present tense. And the second is that you constantly used 'U' instead of 'you'. Sorry, it's a bit of an eyetwitch moment everytime I read it. Aprt from that I really like how you've set up the story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. btw I'm sorry if I sounded mean by critisising your writing- I know I slip up with past and present tenses all the time- I'm really tired and I tend to be brutally honest when I am. So I hope that you don't mind- I really do like this chapter. update soon!
Unsugar chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Please continue! I want to what happen next!
Koiice chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
cool story cant wait for an update ill keep watch c ya x
Crystal-light-27 chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
oh. i like this story so much you can't delete it. i can not wait for the next chapter.
pemphetru chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
this is way too short! monster! please get on with it!