Reviews for October Dandelion
RaspBerryHats chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Excellent. Truly. Again, wowingly perfect with Faith
Priscilla19 chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Nice follow up like you said. Kinda sad again, but in a happy way, you know?

I'm kinda intrigued now... You seem to have this whole '3rd person-1st person' narration going on that's quite gripping. Have you read Chuck Palahniuk's 'Diary'? Very real, but still fantasy-like. Like this.

Pris.
Rebel Goddess chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I might be wrong (I often am) but I thought that in Widows Faith's Mum died of an OD? Otherwise this was really good. More please. Thanks for the note.
The Phantom chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
This was really quite something. Again, you took something that could have been an endless piece of prose and trimmed it into an agonizingly short poem. You do that so well.

Sidebar: I dearly loved "Widows" and was thrilled to see a companion piece.

~ Phantom
ozma914 chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Great stuff. It's nice to see Faith trying to come to terms with her past. Of course, that could be a full time job ...