Reviews for Ships that Pass in the Night
BryannaB709 chapter 2 . 5/1/2016
Wow. She is a brat.
BryannaB709 chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
Pretty good so far!
Ebony Starstorm chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
I'll be your Beta if you would wish. It's a good story!
semi-sweet and nuts chapter 5 . 10/17/2005
Hi, thanks for your review on "Willy Nilly". I don't think it's about taking "everything he says and does at face value" though. Rather the other way around. And I suggest not taking "everything he says and does at face value" in MY fiction either, he's the narrator, he can say what he wants, but the reader doesn't necessarily have to trust him...

In fact, I'm afraid of him being too "together" in my fiction, too coherent, not whimsy enough, I think he's heading more and more in that direction... After all it is a pretty logical an constructed "stream of consciousness" for anybody, most of us don't make that much sense I'm sure...

I guess your Willy is much more "together" though so I can see what you mean... As you said, there's always more than one way to interpret a character. About as many ways as there are fanfic writers out there...
eruriel chapter 4 . 10/16/2005
I really like your story, you've got to finish it (people (me being no exception/) has a tendancy not).

I'm trying to decide who I like the most; Wendy or Carline.

It's hard, but I think I'm (especially after this chapter) leaning more towards Wendy...
iceFaery chapter 4 . 10/15/2005
This is one of the best CaTCF fics I've read. It's a VERY good start. Please update soon:)
innocentpurity chapter 4 . 10/13/2005
YAY, you updated, I so wanted to hear from the story, since it's so sweet and cool. I love it, and yes, I am one of the people who read the story!

Do not fear, it's cute!

Thanks for everything and May God Bless You!
apple chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Very good story! I'm loving it!