Reviews for The Pharaoh Is Dead Long Live The Pharaoh
Redglowingheart chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Queen of Light 17 chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Very heart warming. Keep up the good work.
yellow blaze chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Please add more chapters! By the way, has anyone told you that you spelled pharaoh wrong? There's an h after the last o. Just letting you know in case no one told you. Long live the pharoah!
darklady919 chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
well... hear are some mistakes i picked up...

but he still didn’t want to exept it

but he still didn’t want to accept it

He was faszinated and stunned

He was fascinated and stunned

this temple was a repklika of a temple in Thebes

this temple was a replica of a temple in Thebes

had been prying to Ra

had been praying to Ra

(though i think this, and probably some others, were simply typos...)

other than those small mistakes, thats pretty good for a translation! trust me, i've seen others much worse...

I love the story, though! I hope you do continue it, too!
the-bee-keeper chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Ar, that was really sweet! Continue if you can!
redconvoy chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Cute story. Continue it if you have any ideas on how to do it. :)