Reviews for The Rankless Shinobi
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/16
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/15
that was good keep the chapters coming
drizma chapter 16 . 3/21
This was nice. A good story.
yindragonkiba chapter 16 . 3/21
Damn love it
sgriffin chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
you focused to much on the chuunin ecam arc instead of fully developing naruto it would be great if you had finished this and released the curse seal
Death45Scyth47 chapter 16 . 3/29/2014
The story is great, I just have to say you kinda pissed me off by letting the Hyuuga council treat the Fourths son like that
Darthjester13 chapter 16 . 7/2/2013
interesting story
Laser Crusader chapter 12 . 3/11/2013
I know this is a long shot but is there any chance you will finish this story. It is interesting story and I wish for you to finish what you started.
Jay chapter 16 . 12/31/2012
This story seemed interesting at first, but then you went and put the curse seal on Naruto, why on earth would the hokage allow the son of yondaime to be enslaved? a jinchuriki that can be killed instantly is of no use to anyone, you make it seem like on chapter 16 Hiashi saved naruto from being a weapon, when he simply gave the tool for people who hate him to kill and control him easily. And you allow him to partake in shinobi missions even though his not a shinobi? cant do elemental jutsus, his a slave, a jinchuriki, and he doesnt give a shit when he finds out about his parents? thats just bloody ridiculous, you've made things so stupid its not even funny.
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Hakoirii chapter 16 . 8/31/2010
Well, no offense, but as much as I like the originality of this story and your writing style, the plot line isn't really that... amazing or whatnot. I don't know, it just feels like something's... missing from it, and I can't put my finger on it... Oh well, sorry I wasn't much help, but it's your story, I'm sure you'll figure it out, so keep it up
kyuubi shadow chapter 16 . 8/4/2010
good chappy!
Slytherin's Pimp chapter 16 . 7/7/2010
This is ok. Are you going update? Will the village know Naruto beat Sand Boy?
ToraShines chapter 16 . 4/28/2010
I absolutely love this story! Please update it as soon as you can! Although the plot is way off from most other fics, you did so amazingly! I really want to know what Jiraya and Naruto are planning on doing the day after this!
Leprechaungirl chapter 15 . 1/11/2010

Just wondering why you decided to give Tenten a family name and then change it almost completely every single time her name comes up. I.e. Gai (Guy) nominating for the Chuunin exams, Tenten's name on the board during the preliminaries for the 3rd exam...

Also you keep on changing the spelling Sabaku. It’s something that you can easily fix with spell check as long as you do it right the first time.

Please also proof-read your work maybe a week after you first wrote it in order to see it through new eyes. I find printing it out and doing the corrections by hand in red or another colour helps a lot with typos.

I'll be the first to admit that my spelling and grammar is atrocious. Just five years ago my spelling level was on an elementary school level (Grade Four).

Just a few corrections here and there and your story will be much more pleasant to read.


Flower Kid Is a Leprechaun

PS: I do like your story and I think its interesting enough to continue reading it.
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