|Reviews for Young Love|
| YinYangTwin1 chapter 2 . 1/7/2008
I guess its safe to say that your not updating anymore huh? Well too bad
| VacantEyes chapter 2 . 4/5/2007
Did I put in a review for this?If I dint, I have to say this is really short n sweet..
| Pasasword69 chapter 2 . 3/15/2007
| Kole Werthersfield chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
Nice touch but please stop with the Bya-Ren combos
| Yuniepie chapter 2 . 1/7/2006
OMG! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I'm so happy! Another HitsuMatsu fanficcu! I love to see more fans and more fanficcu on this pairing, there just is not enough! More...
And you've written it so cute too! I loved the second chapter and how you portrayed Hinamori an Hitsugaya's relationship. If anything were to happen between them that's how I pictured it would. _ An Shirou-chan's SO cute when he's blushing! XD Adorable!
An the first chappie was really funny! Renji's impression of Byakuya was hilarious! LOL
I love you! Thank you so much for this wonderful fanficcu! Please update it soon! *favs*
| Wielder of paperclips chapter 2 . 12/25/2005
Okay... I actually like HitsuHina friendship interactions as well. XD It's very IC somehow, the way Hinamori teased Hitsugaya.
Haha, I see you followed up on the "Hitsugaya loves Paperwork" theme. Good, good. Hope to see more of that in the future.
Same criticism as my other review: too rushed. But thanks for keeping me amused. _
| Wielder of paperclips chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Ignoring the implied shounen-ai... I realize that actually like Rangiku and Renji inteactions. Well, the way YOU write 'em, anyway.
Forgive me, but would you mind a little constructive criticism? It seemed a bit... rushed. I think you could've fleshed out the plot a little better with a few descriptions, etc.
If you want a full-out opinion on this (I just placed what I thought needed the most attention), just ask away. This story has caught my interest somewhat. Even though the pairing brought the word "pedophile" to mind.;
| Classic gambit chapter 2 . 12/24/2005
Hey wow, another HitsuxMatsu! Hooray!
I've come to like this coupling, and although I love HitsuxHina, hitsugaya and Matsumoto could be very sweet together!
Why not have Hitsugaya confess his feelings to Matsumoto when she's crying (if she cries)over Ichimaru forgetting her b-day? it could be quite cute! Anyways, just an idea!
| naruto chapter 2 . 12/24/2005
kep it up
| kimper chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
| Baka Zero chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Please make this multi-chap since this is such a good fic but if you are gonna continue with the RenjiXByakuya(GAH I CAN'T BELIEVE I TYPED THAT) make it implied shounen-ai(I CAN'T BELIEVE I TYPED THAT TOO) and not showing them doing stuff with each other (AH THAT IMAGE IS STUCK IN MY HEAD) or I would stop reading this
| Clazziquai chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
I like RenRuki too! But Byakuya was a funny element of the fic. Multi-chapter!
| Jey chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Please make a muliti-CH
| Naruto chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
it should be a multi-CH
| wai no feni chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Oh, there's no possible way I could flame this; not when it features one of my absolute favorite couples of Bleach: HitsuMatsu. Ah...at the beginning of this fic I had hoped, and then to realize I had thought right...ah _ Not enough people write about them...