Reviews for Harry Potter and the Bearers of the Light |
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lapapillonne chapter 23 . 11/29/2011 This was lovely. I can't imagine why more people haven't reviewed. The plot could have easily been a bit more complicated, especially considering the magnitude of the ideas that this story contains. However, the story telling itself was very nice (much nicer than a lot of crap found on this site!). I am looking forward to the sequel very much, so, pray, continue writing. I imagine that all you will do is improve :] Best wishes, and may the muses grace you, -Adrienne |
MystStories chapter 25 . 10/8/2011 interesting story i like the design on how theyr bond forms and then grows. Also they group being so similar yet so deeply different from a group like death eaters using some similar tools yet being so very different. |
Belthezzor chapter 2 . 4/12/2011 Great start for your story. Just a couple of things though. I noticed that you had Harry accept his own fault and shortcomings (which is a good thing), but blame himself for how ron was acting himself. It's okay to have a passive attitude and account for yourself, but if your TRUE friend (your first actual) was acting like Ron did for almost the whole year because of jealously, envy, spite, etc... it's time to review your friendship. Also, just because you're friends with someone (s), does not mean that you can't keep anything to yourself. Friendships aren't built on telling every single thing to your friend, or, otherwise you would be a bad friend. It's okay to share with friends and still have some things to yourself. About Harry telling his friends the prophecy. The order struggled a whole year to keep it under wraps, and try to keep it out of Voldemort's hands. Now you have him telling his friends who do not know a lick of occlumency (well Hermione might) where it could just be picked out of their heads by an enemy. I'm sure it's not just Dumbledore and Snape who know Legilimency. Anyway...keep up the good work. |
GGSVHM chapter 25 . 12/13/2010 OH GOD...This story is AMAZING! Your writing is brillient...The characters even better... Love how you got Hermione and Harry using dark magic. Cant wait to start reading the next part :D d:D-[-{ |
PinaPoe chapter 25 . 9/26/2010 This was an excellent story that took the powerful Harry but still did not keep him being god like and unstoppable. Having Herminone in equal standing was a good addition. There are many cliches of independent powerful Harry that you ignored and twisted around making this probably one of my top three Ind. Harry stories I have read. The actions of the ministry is also believable and creepy. Excellent work I hope the rest are done! |
JadeSea chapter 25 . 9/2/2010 Oh my word! That was one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I cannot wait to start on the sequel. Please don't ever stop writing! |
G Fawkes chapter 10 . 7/31/2010 Quick side note: Since this is AU, can we just kill off Ron, or put him in the hospital (petrified) or something? Harry could just ask Dumbledore " Sir, I was wondering if I could have the sword of Godric Gryfindor? It only ever came out of the hat for ME, I've got six or seven uses for it, soon, and I really don't think Ron is smart enough to ever really count on him saving me!" I don't know. Just a thought. |
G Fawkes chapter 6 . 7/31/2010 I know this story is a couple years old already, but I'll assume you check reviews occasionally. Brilliant so far, and I'm only on ch6, but truly, there is talent on display here! I always make sure to mention, as it is not often observed, when a person can actually write well. I'll leave it at that for now, and maybe comment again later. Nice work! |
Gandalf the White Edelweiss chapter 23 . 7/27/2010 That was a great Epilogue. Now, onto the second part! |
Gandalf the White Edelweiss chapter 21 . 7/27/2010 NO! NO! Please don't let Hermione die! Please! |
Gandalf the White Edelweiss chapter 20 . 7/27/2010 Okay, I blew up and started cussing out Dumbledore and those Ministry idiots in my mind when I read what happened. I'm calm now, but that got me angry. Well, more than angry, acutally, but all in all your story is mind blowing. I got into it, and I felt what the characters were feeling! |
Gandalf the White Edelweiss chapter 16 . 7/27/2010 That was awesome! I can't wait to read on! Hermione was intense |
Gandalf the White Edelweiss chapter 12 . 7/27/2010 Amazing! Absolutely wonderful! I love the story! |
Gandalf the White Edelweiss chapter 9 . 7/26/2010 Oooo! Such a great story! I can't wait to read on |
Gandalf the White Edelweiss chapter 8 . 7/26/2010 The names make me think of the Warriors series |