Reviews for Harry Potter and the Bearers of the Light |
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dougal74 chapter 11 . 7/10/2008 Another good chapter. |
dougal74 chapter 10 . 7/10/2008 Good chapter. |
dougal74 chapter 9 . 7/9/2008 good chapter. |
dougal74 chapter 8 . 7/9/2008 Good chapter. |
dougal74 chapter 7 . 7/9/2008 good chapter. |
dougal74 chapter 6 . 7/9/2008 good chapter. |
dougal74 chapter 5 . 7/9/2008 good chapter. |
dougal74 chapter 4 . 7/9/2008 good chapter. |
alix33 chapter 16 . 7/7/2008 "“Now that we’ve settled that,” Fred said with a grin, “I’m sure our favorite investor would like a tour of the shop.”" - I'm assuming from this comment of Fred's that Harry has told Hermione he supplied the twins with quite a large part of their start-up capital? |
alix33 chapter 9 . 7/7/2008 "Harry to secret them away in his trunk." - Didn't you perhaps mean 'secrete them away'? |
alix33 chapter 5 . 7/7/2008 "The three stood up and hid the books in one of the cluttered shelves in the study." - I hope they marked where they hid them! Or would they just "Accio" them once they return? "Harry immediately notice that there was no door knob and opened his mouth to ask how they were supposed to get through it," - Did you perhaps mean to rwite: 'Harry immediately noticed'? |
alix33 chapter 4 . 7/7/2008 In your Potterverse for this fic, does the Black Library (or, as it is now called: Hermione's Haven) not have a catalogue of sorts at all? |
Black-Bloodend chapter 25 . 5/18/2008 10 out of 10 good job. |
witowsmp chapter 25 . 12/19/2007 I look forward to when you complete the final part of the trilogy. I noticed that in the OotP movie, the Death Eaters and Order members fought in the way I would imagine the acceleration charm from this story would look. I wonder if the special effects people working on that movie read your story. |
AnnF chapter 25 . 12/16/2007 Hope you can type more soon. |