|Reviews for Could you|
| o-flightless chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
cool very cool
| Monkee-J chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Ok... It would help if you used the correct words (like when you wrote shore instead of sure) and spelt correctly but besides from that you got a nice story. could be longer but I'm not complaining. It's short and sweet and very good. Kudos!