Reviews for Pray
Rayni chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Awwwwwww. Just awwwwww. Loved it. :D
revolution rae chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Lovely mixture of sweet and sad:)
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Aww, this is adorable.

Well written. Good read.
iv chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
well well sister. ya gotta admit it was quite impressive and romantic. i'm expecting you to write more!:D
Sunfrost chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Awesome.
Dragonwings144 is lazy chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Hm. A Zelos and Colette pairing? I normally don't think those two work well together, Zelos being... Zelos, and Colette being so sweet and obviously crazy for Lloyd. But it's still possible, and you make it seem probable in this fic. Good job~! Me likes. Check out my own TOS fictions if you like- I have two. "Sheena's Problem" and "Runaway". My penn name is Dragonwings144
Tanithus chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
YEA ! NICE JOB ! I LUV ZELOS x COLETTE !
Sabriel41 chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
What a wonderful, sweet story! I enjoyed in particular how you wrote Colette; perceptive, unapologetic, and yet down to her body language, ineffably *herself.* It's amusing to see how easily she looks through Zelos' facade...

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Speaking of which, you depict the swordsman rather well, too, effectively balancing his lighter and more serious sides. Best of all, "Pray" isn't too romantic too quickly, but it holds hope, perhaps, that when the world has arighted itself once more...

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Well, that's the beauty of one-shots; it lets the readers wonder.

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Keep up the great work, and Cheers!

~Sabriel.