Reviews for Even In The Middle Of War
connerboy chapter 4 . 8/9/2009
If you finish this story ill praise you all you want because this is the kind of innocent love that i like reading about so finish the story please.O_O o got my eyes on this story!
Anonymous chapter 4 . 1/21/2009
Nice chapter. Please update soon! It is a really good story.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 1/21/2009
Again, nice chappie. Good work, keep it up!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Good story. I like it alot.
Hiroko Yamashita chapter 4 . 7/5/2007
“I am Jeremie Belpois, son of Jonas Belpois, heir to absolutely nothing.” I absolutely adore that line. Who knew Jeremie could be so charming, it's really adorable. Although I think his usual nervousness and awkward behavior around girls is a million times more endearing. _

I guess Aelita's dad isn't Franz, after all. I totally forgot that Aelita and her father are named Stones in this story, not Hopper. _

I can't decide how I feel about that guy. "Except William. He could do whatever he pleased to and with Aelita, and Master Stone’s never cared." That is an upsetting and alarming statement. What kind of parent cares so much more about themselves than their own child's wellbeing? And just when I was beginning to think he might be a good person.

I hope you can update soon! I really wanna read the next chapter! Oh well, I just have to wait. And this story is definitely worth waiting for! _
Hiroko Yamashita chapter 3 . 7/5/2007
Oh gosh! This isn't looking too good. Well, I'm kinda glad that they're both using each other. I would feel really bad for someone if only one of them were being treacherous and the other was being honest. Well, I guess it's not exactly treachery. Jeremie's serving his country (Come on Washington, can't you come up with another plan?) and Aelita's just trying to get away from William. I would probably do the same thing. Wonder how long it'll take them to figure out that they truly love each other...

I've decided I like Cali quite a bit. She seems like a really good friend. _ I can't really say how well suited for Odd she is (I haven't seen them together enough to fully decide), but I think she's a much better match for him than a lot of other OC's I've seen paired with him.

I like how you incorporated Sissi and Ulrich into the story. They actually served a purpose, they weren't just there. I hope to see more of them in later chapters. Do you think Yumi will be able to make an appearance soon? Oh yeah, who is Aelita's father in this fic, anyway? Is it Franz? Or someone else?
Hiroko Yamashita chapter 2 . 7/5/2007
I absolutely love this story! It's so original! I've really never seen anything like it. And the way you portray the characters makes it all seem so real.

One thing I noticed was the sudden switch from Aelita's POV to an omniscient (Is that the word for it?) one. I found that a bit strange, but it didn't take away from the story in anyway. I still enjoyed it just as much. _

Oh, about William...HE SUCKS! The canon Will annoys me, but he's a decent enough person (sometimes). This universe's William is down right detestable (Which makes him a very good antagonist)! He's horrible! Disgusting, despicable, he's not even human! He's pig! A filthy, stupid, arrogant pig! How could he hit Aelita (She's so sweet)!

Ah, sorry about the ranting. _ I just had to say it. He just makes me so mad, on the other hand Jeremie is as sweet and adorable as ever. X3
JxAlovergirl chapter 4 . 2/4/2007
NO! You need to UPDATE! Well, Please?*looks hopeful*
No-longer-in-FanFiction.net chapter 4 . 6/28/2006
AWESOME. Though I do have a pet peeve. Jeremy saying dear at every end of sentences.
Saffron333 chapter 4 . 2/18/2006
are you ever going to contignue this one? it is a verry nice story and could probably go on for atleast 30 chapters, if so you may want to speed up the pase lol... cts!
unknone chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
verry nice, please keep going. the style of speeking is very well done, but thay did dent say "kid" back then, thay would have said child.
LadyKyra13 chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
Me: Yay! So much updating!

Evil me: After so long...

Me: Hush! These things take time. Besides, you're the reason my updates take so long...

Evil Me: No, basketball and boys are the reasons your updates take so long...

Me: Shut up! This was an awesome chappy, with yet another cliffy...

Evil ME: Cliffies are evil. I like cliffies.

ME: SILENCE! Please update soon!
Long lost sorrow chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
You updated within fifteen days! *yay*

All right, I'm officially classified as weird...
Cold-Foxx chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
Awesome chapter A ball! I love to dance at them... Even if I can't dance. But I can count! LoL, update soon!
Neo Aguni chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
Another cliffe *groans* please update soon. I want to know what happens next, and if you need an idea or two plz feel free to ask. I love this fic. My fave couple in my fave time.
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