Reviews for Our Story
Era Daven chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
This is such a pretty little poem! It seems like English is not language, yes? If so, ignore those nasty reviews; the reviewers obviously don't know:)
Butterfly-TeddyBear chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Good poem. It's true in a way. Keep writing them.
Dolores chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Well that was terrible. T-e-r-r-i-b-l-e.
jhhbsjdhgsudfyu chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Lame.
Emily chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
That's really excellent, I love the movie and I think your poem really captures the emotional side of the story. Excellent work!
lupinsiriusluva chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
this was a very good poem, very romantic, but i never understood what did it have to do with HP? and as for the spelling, it was fairly good but, cuidado con los tiempos pasados. you seem to have a little trouble with the past tense, but it was still good :D