|Reviews for Please Stop Pretending|
| jessi chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Interesting story, I liked it!
| WhenSadnessTakesOver chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
I loved it, though I got confused at the wife part and Derrick... it was great though
| dame egocentrique chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Well... That was confusing, but still hurts as hell. It was a good read. :)
| lovemya2000 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Awesome story like nothing ive ever read.
| cupcake.universe chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
| yay chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
The whole cakes thing bugged me, but aside from that it was pretty good.
| CheshireCat23 chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Wow, didn't expect those two twist. Really, really good story!
| krissy chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
u should continue this story :)
| kriskhil chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
the best one shot ever! one of my favs now! so original and cool
| potato4 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I loved this SO MUCH! Right to favorites it goes..
| myriammar chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
That was a great story the twist was well hidden! Woww really great story!
| BeckyRocks chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
omg i love this story!
| roxie danielle malfoy chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I sort of had a feeling that the Derrick guy was going to be Draco as well. Just doesnt seem like Draco's character to give up someone that he loves so much so easily. I must really say, this is a novel idea and i really love how it turned out! Its sweet to see that Draco would have given up everything his family owns just to remain with the one he loves forever.
GREAT JOB HERE! I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY )
| txcowgirljp chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
could i love it any more? honestly, so great. well done!
| sm chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Interesting story! Haven't read any HP FF stories like this one!