Reviews for While You Were Sleeping
StarrGazer chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Great job!

Perhaps you could write an internal monologue for Sam as she is stirring - feeling what it's like to be held in his arms...

Dunno - just a thought :)

Cheers!
JaneRain13 chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Aww...that was so cute, sweet, sad.
Natters chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
I mean, you have this great little butt and...nevermind that now. Where was I? Uh, right. Difficult. - love it! so jack!
sandwiches chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
A very well written internal monologue. Very enjoyable!
SG-Fan chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Great job... ah, if only.