Reviews for No Mouth But Some Serpent's
ladyofsilverdawn chapter 33 . 8/4
Ohmygod! So incredibly wonderful! The angst and plot are fantastic. But damn. My heart breaks for Harry. I hope he gets revenge in some fashion. Such a fabulous story. Thanks so much for sharing it!
SeekForTheSnitch chapter 4 . 7/12
whoa! That was heavy
snap's agenda is so conflicting
Tony Moonstone chapter 33 . 7/10
This was such a good book 2.
So many twists and turns.
I sorry but so far I hate Connor with a passion.
He's bad most of the story towards Harry and good a small portion of it.
This loyalty of Harry towards Connor is really getting on my nerves.
It's such a different take on Draco, I so like him.
Also how Hufflepuff came to his defense especially Justin Finch-Fletchley.
I can only guess what will happen in book 3.
Onward I go to book 3.
Take care and be well.
Tony Moonstone chapter 2 . 7/9
Interesting very interesting.
So far so good.
More chapters are need for a more good review.
Onward I go.
Take care and be well!
moodysavage chapter 20 . 6/27
Oh that color changing bottle is so sweet and brilliant! I can't wait till it shows different colors as feelings change and develop. Draco will be checking that bottle!
moodysavage chapter 20 . 6/25
I find the snakes comments hilarious
moodysavage chapter 15 . 6/24
I like Harry. trying to figure things out with the filter of having strong emotions.
Guest chapter 27 . 6/2
oh my God lily used her compulsion power on James oh no oh no and refuse got obliviated by Dumbledore because he was too much of a risk and the only one WHO ACTUALLY CARES ABOUT HARRYS HAPPINESS AND WELLBEING
gpenguin906 chapter 12 . 5/14
Conner is so pathetic. just die already.
gpenguin906 chapter 11 . 5/14
"I can't believe you're serving voldermort Harry! how could you do this to me?! huhubu"

Connor the most annoying, dumbest character. it's like the author said how could I write the laziest, dumbest, most one dimensional character ever. let's ignore all other progress for dumbness sake.
gpenguin906 chapter 10 . 5/14
"you won't let Ron hurt Malfoy, Harry, how could you do this to me Harry!"

"I thought you love me, Harry. This is Gryffindor vengeance Harry. You're such a Slytherin for not letting my friend hurt your friend , Harry!"

Are you doing that on purpose? making the twin the most hatable, annoying, irrational character ever?
Black Firedragon Drake chapter 31 . 5/8
Wait a second... did YOU just invent an obscurial? Or bring harry at the edge of becoming on, even when this sort of thing wasnt canon at this time? XD GOSH! thats fantastic. Its my fourth read of the Story but the first after magical creatures came out. Lightning... you are absolutly incredible.
ImMoku chapter 3 . 1/11
Im so tired of lily's behavior
ImMoku chapter 1 . 1/11
I didn't understand Lily's mindset..
in book 1 it says that lily didn't trust divinity
so why Lily making Harry who is her SON a WEAPON like what the prophecy stated?
Lily in this fanfic is Very OOC
James making Harry a Weapon is most Logic
but Lily? bruh.. she is a LOVING mother..
CoffeNiffler chapter 33 . 1/9
I love this story. It's better than original 3
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