|Reviews for Shattered|
| xBookEaterx chapter 10 . 1/10
I would love it if you wrote some sort of sequel or related story to the drabble you wrote about Ed missing Al's party.
I really really LOVE the way you write!
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/30/2014
These are amazing! I especially love the one where Ed misses Al's birthday party because he got shot- Al must've felt horrible afterwards!
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/30/2014
Very powerful and bittersweet. The Elrics really are something else...
| Peacexfreedom chapter 4 . 12/11/2013
Awwww, poor Ed! *hugs for a sad Ed*
But adorable parental fluff :D Well written. Props!
| Elvenlaughter chapter 17 . 11/16/2013
I can't count how many times you made me cry in the last couple of hours. Some of these are just heart-wrenchingly, perfectly beautiful. You are a remarkable writer. Really. It has been such a pleasure to read through this collection.
| ForeverSokaiDestiny chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
I'v got one thing to say about chapter 1... WHAT HAPPENED? 8D
I love it but, what happened to Ed that made him need the surgery again? O.o
Awww it's just too sweet at the end... BEST. ENDING. EVAAR. **
"I love you" is the cure to all family angst.
| ArthurAlbionKirkland chapter 17 . 6/4/2013
OH MY GOODNESS.
This...this is...just... I can't even...
I ADORE this. BOTH of your ridiculously long arcs. But ESPECIALLY this one.
...call me weird, but...
Wouldn't these stories usually be moved out of this oneshot/drabble collection? They're both AMAZING stories, but... They don't fit in here.
(Silly me just realized you might not know which one I'm talking about, because there are many 'oneshots-with-sequels'. I mean the one that won the Green Lion award, with Ed in prison.)
Also, question! Would that oneshot in the graveyard with Roy and Ed and Maes' birthday be a sequel? I really liked that one.
I really hope you post more stuff soon! It's been AGES!
Singing off' red-rimmed eyes and all,
| Firefly264 chapter 12 . 2/10/2013
Holy crap, how could you do this? Actually, I've already read this (a while ago), and I was bored so I decided to revisit, because these are all INSANELY AWESOME, but seriously? Mustang's dead, Ed's drugged and alone in jail, and Al is way too sweet to have to endure this (well, that's not so bad...)?!
I now christen thee...ANGST MASTER! *trumpets*
But seriously, all of these are great. Love them!
| Amarissia chapter 17 . 11/4/2012
Really amazing fic, made me cry several times. I hope you do more Parental!Roy, I love that. Thank you!
| SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 17 . 10/27/2012
Well, that is probably the most gruesome, depressing and all out angsty "Al is dead" fic I have ever read. Ever. And because I am more than a little bit of a sadistic reader, that's saying something.
Anyway, beautiful fic... fics.
| SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 10 . 10/27/2012
WAIT, AL'S DEAD TOO? I think a piece of my heart just died 'C
| Do a Barrel Roll chapter 17 . 9/16/2012
Okay, the last arc was amazing, first of all.
I don't know if you're ever continuing this, but how about Ed, Roy, and a hostage situation or an interrogation?
| LucyLu71958 chapter 17 . 9/1/2012
The last story in this and what was it? Um...Birthday Boy. That one I never saw coming - well atleast the hospital, but I thought he was lying somehow - were my favorite. Awesome job on all of them _ they're all pretty cool. Keep writing in the future! :)
| YAJJ chapter 13 . 8/21/2012
I love this chapter. I've read it like 5 times, and yet I still cry when Roy lets the Gate take him... WHY GATE WHY! I mean, I know that it was essential for Al's memories and all... but still. WHY?
AND WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER? Good god, I wish I could write half as well as you can.
So... yeah. I think that's all I wanted to say. I'd give you some constructive criticism... but I don't have any. You write so perfectly! DX
Kay, I think that's all.
Until next time,
| 2lazy2login chapter 17 . 8/16/2012
I will not cry. I will not cry. I will not-
Oh who the hell am I fooling?