|Reviews for Deconstructing the General|
| Zeon.Rat chapter 9 . 2/11
I really, really enjoyed this. General Hammond's my favourite character in all three series and I'm always saddened by how little fanfic there is about him.
This was great. Incredibly well written and paced, the dialogue was wonderful and I genuinely did cry a bit with all the Maggie scenes. I must admit that I really don't like Hammond/Carter so I blatantly skipped that section (to me, he's always looked out for her as another daughter what with his close friendship with Jacob) but all in all, this is probably my favourite SG1 fic I've ever read. Really touching story and I loved how much we saw of Hammond, and how raw everything in this was. Great stuff.
| Mika Uriah chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
oh man...that phone call got to me...damn .
| smithcrafter chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Wow! I do believe this story's going to have a lot more "meat" than I was expecting from the summary. Excellent beginning.
| Lucretia Skelington chapter 9 . 7/15/2007
Oh! That was lovely!
Now, repeat after me: more Hammond, more Hammond, more...
| Lucretia Skelington chapter 2 . 7/14/2007
I'm really enjoying this. I like the different take on Hammond's view and relationship with SG1.
| Obsessed Pam chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
This is such an interestin take on the story as we know it and so well written too.
| taqukaq chapter 2 . 10/8/2006
I LOVE the story! I havn't read a fanfic that has explained the 1969 time travel quite like this :) Elmendorf AFB is a great place to live through. I lived next to it for 10 years growing up. They have the BEST play grounds there. Even if Anchorage does gets a bit of snow now and then ;)
| jakefanatic chapter 2 . 6/27/2006
Excellent two chapters so far! Looking forward to reading what happens next! :) So far no bleach required, just bars of soap are need for their language! :P
| novastar22 chapter 2 . 6/18/2006
OMFG Jack loses the General and Sam ! ;-) ok. really amusing to see how Hammond thinks...
| SeedC chapter 9 . 5/23/2006
Excellent writing. :) Thank you.
| trtlsoup2001 chapter 8 . 4/22/2006
Wonderful chapter. I always get a bit teary when you have George interact with his wife.
| SeedC chapter 7 . 4/11/2006
I am sitting on the edge of my seat 8o
| trtlsoup2001 chapter 7 . 3/28/2006
Yes, George curses a lot! LOL...
Terrific chapter. Glad you got Jacob involved, and that you wrote in that he was already sick.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Rude's Mom chapter 7 . 3/27/2006
"Plus her warmth was resting delightfully against his middle and he continued to doze, enjoying the burgeoning feeling of warm desire."
You have stock in a mind bleaching company don't you?
Loved the chapter and I'm hoping that General Carter never gets the full report of the other general's adventure.
| SeedC chapter 6 . 3/16/2006
This is an excellent story, riveting...