Reviews for Shades of Black
Jess chapter 1 . 7/4/2007

-recomposes self-

Sorry. Ha.

Your story is really great though, I love the last lines a lot!


opheliasnorkels chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Creepy. I liked it though. _
Rosie Real chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
*begins to cry*
MystWriter07 chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Really good. I like your secrecy I guess you could call it. It was haunting, great to read halloween night _
ello chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Really awesome and creepy. loved it xD
Mystic Golden Wolf chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
awesome imagry. so sweet and sad...

Pax nC
Kitten Kisses chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
You don't accept anonymous reviews. You might want to fix that setting in your profile.

It was interesting. The only quip I really had was the dates of death. If she is looking at a gravestone marked December 1st, and she dies December 3rd... well, to be honest, there really isn't a way that is possible.

Gah, I'm not making sense. Here's what I mean to say- if Sango is staring at a gravestone marked for Dec1st, and her family is staring at hers two days later- there couldn't have been any time for anything.

The line before the last was a little cheesy.

I did like the opening a lot, though. Comparing the color black to those many different things was a really nice touch.
sangi chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
YAY! YAY! AYAYAYAYYAY! -Dances for up to three minutes in circle- YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!

I love this. You learned how to write! Write more soon!