Reviews for Paradox
lith4 chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
This is a fun read.
Dave P chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Great fanfic! It's really original and funny.
Gundum M chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
I love this story. one of the funnyeist ryoga/ukyo pair ups i ever read.
Shark8 chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
Yay! Very nicely done. I'm a big fan of time-travel, paradoxes, and alternate universes, and as such I really enjoyed this story. Quite the enjoyable work.
BaKaBaBi chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Lol! This has such a crazy plot! I wish so much that you would update it...

poor ukyou...crazy incest, that family...
burgerbecky chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
I enjoyed reading this little yarn. You did a great job!
Kinai chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
A very good story. I know that you wrote it a long time ago but if you make a continuation tell me.
Kinai.
Final-Fan chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
By "straight Ranma" I meant not crossover, altaverse, etc.
Final-Fan chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
What a great fic. One of the best time travel stories I've read; possibly THE best one that's straight Ranma.

This is just more proof as to what a great writer Thrytlhind is. Now if only he'd continue some of those other stories...
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Amazon secret technique on the par with the

crouch of the wild tiger! Look it Jenny Mccarthy!

LOL!

I changed into a FOX! And the bad part is...THAT

SOUNDS LIKE A COMPLIMENT! *grin*

"Yep, Chaos Rejection," Ryouga nodded. "I knew you were a control freak."

"I remember someone jumping into the shower with me," Ryouga noted,

then snorted.

"Grenade launchers," Ryouga muttered.

I like it. Ryoga and Ukyou are Ranma's parents and Genma

sealed the techniques because he genuinely felt bad for

something he did.

"Wow, all that time and you were trying

to marry your own..." All three of them turned green.

Some really good lines throughout the whole fic and the ending

was great!
a chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
I have to say that explain a couple of things like why Cologne would'nt let they girls hwlp Ranma in the training when he lost his strenght. Also explan why Ranma sometimes have fangs. I hope that you do sequl to this one becuase if the frist one was funny can't what for the second.
dswynne chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Three words: DB's review SUCKS.

MY three words: Good job, guy!

-D

PS. The humor was spot on, the characters were IC, and you most definitely tied up the loose ends (Ukyo and Shampoo as fiancees are taken care of, and Kodachi is STILL not a factor: therefore Akane wins by default...YAY!). I, too, would like a sequel, especially where Ryouga and Ranma's relationship is concerned. It will definitely be a difficult transistion from rivals to father and son. Take care!
DB chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
Sorry. It's not romantic at all. Nor is it funny in the slightest, so it's not humorous. And it's so painfully contrived it can't be taken the least bit seriously either. There's no internal consistancy in the motivations of the characters, nor do they make much sense. It fails to do much except be there.
Anime Fan chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
This sotry is, in one word: weird.

You need to check your grammar, as I found a few mistakes here and there, but nothing that was too bad. The idea for this is strange, but well, it gets the job done.
Rogue1615 chapter 1 . 3/19/2002
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I can't really say how much i enjoyed that. The humor value alone was the best. I hope you add a better ending or something. Be cool to see how ranma reacts.

Rogue1615
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