I am excited for the next chapter. Keep it up!

X'D

1st, OMG, I love this. 2nd, Link's a hylian, not an elf.

Agh, who cares if the author is a nod/head shake tard when Link is busy being epic?

Oh dear God, the author is one of hose nod/head shake retards.

Nodded. WUTOO WEETAUR WAII WAII! X'D

Awesome.

Why are you having. Link hide his ears. THIS time, I can, without a doubt, say that the whole secrecy thing is extremely overused and even more extremely dumb.

Oh, nevermind,. then.

How did they even hit Link, even with swarming numbers?! This is dumb.

While true, isn't this story suppossed to be about Link? Shouldn't there be changes that he, as the new main character, makes? For instance, instead of Lyn getting the main victories, have Link get the main victories, but better than Lyn would enough to shock and awe everyone aound him.

So wait, they DO know that they're traveling with a hero, right?

No, author, don't use that "they will live on through memories" bullshit. Memories of dead loved ones are just painful. Stop it, author, just stop it.

Ooooh, I love it!

The exposition of the gerudo. Link saying not all thieves, or pirates are bad and Lyn shouldn't be bothered. Not everyone is the same, not all are bad.

Oooh!

Link's going to do a big battle match to earn a huge amount of money.

While Wil was technically thinking out loud, having temporarily forgotten he had an audience, Rebecca easily heard every word.

With a scowl she leapt to her feet, gathered her bow, and stormed back to camp. Wil blinked in surprise at her sudden departure, trying to figure out why she left in such a hurry.

'That IDIOT!' The young woman screamed in her mind. 'How could he?!'

She hadn't seen him in five years and not only had he not recognized her, he had casually humiliated her without even trying! All of his shots had clustered in the center of her target and he had done so with so much ease that he was thinking about getting a stronger bow!

Rebecca wanted to scream her frustration to the sky, but she couldn't do that. It would cause a big fuss in the camp and she absolutely did not want to explain the reason for her screams. So instead she made beeline to Merlinus's wagons where she picked up a lantern and several quivers of arrows. Once fully stocked up she began to look for Serra so the cleric could ease some of her aches and pains.

So what if it was dark? She'd just shoot by lantern light on the other side of the camp, away from HIM.

If HE could shoot like that, then by Elimine's light Rebecca could too.

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Oooh, a past between the two.

Also, Florida wishes to be trained by Link.

All the ladies and guys want to train with Link.

Lyn did quite well against Guy, a impressive spar abd chat.