Reviews for Shattered, why isn't love fair? Revised Verison
shellythenerd chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
Very nice. I love the way you kept repeating that on verse, it makes a powerful impact. Love very much!
Maeko-Nohara chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Beautiful. Poignant. I might ruin the mood with any other adjectives. Love it very much.
Clover64 chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Excellent piece of poetry...very well written. I love the way you repeat the lines: It use to be so perfect, just you and me.

What ever happened to our young love?

The vows we made?

Why isn’t our love fair and strong anymore?

It sounds very powerful and passionate. Very good job!