|Reviews for Paper Flowers|
| TheFoilDoll chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
such a pretty story.
i'd like to think that's how she would see things.
i love neville, he's a great character :)
i'm adding this to my favourite stories list and it'll be the first one that isn't a zelda fic!
| being-honest chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Very touching- I especially like this one.
| Bagge chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Sweet and sad. In character too. Paper flowers...
| bluelotusflower chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
That's beautiful. I went all tingly, which is what happens when I read a really heartwarming story.
One nitpick, however. You have a bit of a problem with your punctuation that is quite distracting: when you finish dialogue with "he said", "he whispered" etc., you can't start a new sentence. Hmm, that doesn't really make sense... I'll give an example.
"I'm scared." His voice answers.
This is wrong punctuation, because they're two separate sentences; it sounds like "I'm scared. His voice answers". The correct punctuation would be this:
"I'm scared," his voice answers.
Make sense? Sorry about the bad explanation.
| Spinereader chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
That's just heartwrenching! Great imagery with the wrappers there, very effective.
| ella chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
very lovely liked it a lot
| Linda chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
*sobbing hysterically* This was beautiful!
| Lemily chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
That is so cute and so original [for a fanfiction of course]
Finally not one of those slashy/slashy favourite character stories.
I love it. So short but oh well, we get the point.
| Aurora Delilah chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
OH MY GOSH I LOVED THAT! This is the first story I have read that actually doesnt include a main Character in their story. GOOD JOB! Now keep it going PLEASE!