Reviews for Warmth
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2013
Such a cute story! Normally I don't care for first-person fics, but with your's changing POVs between every character involved in the story, it worked out very well. There were only a few typos, and I would've loved even more detail in each chapter, but with first-person, I suppose it's more difficult to get as much in. I thought you kept everyone pretty well in-character, even when Ed was snuggling into Mustang's arms. When a person is hurt so severely, and totally out of it, all their walls and built-up defenses come down, and the instinct for survival kicks in. Poor Ed, he really shouldn't be sent out on missions to cold climates at all, they're too much of a danger to him because of his automail. I loved the last chapter, where Ed seemed reluctant to give back Col. Mustang's jacket. I don't think it was solely due to the chill of his hospital room. It's nice to see Ed's vulnerable side, and any time he and Al can get some parental care from the adults in their life, and especially Mustang, it's a good thing! They really need it. Thanks for such a great story!
Waffles Risa chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
cuuuuuute! :)
Hanyoualchemist1 chapter 5 . 5/8/2013
Eek, squee, fangirl, amazing!; 3
gaap237 chapter 5 . 8/15/2012
Mustang is the best. Really liked how you characterized each character. Great job.
jessi chapter 5 . 7/12/2012
Great story!
Master of the Hellish Yard chapter 5 . 3/31/2012
Dear Henrika:

Sappy endings. Something I've never actually done before, lol. Last chapter was so fluffy, but this was really sweet. Even though hardcore angst is usually what I read/write, the sap and fluff in here is good. Although I don't ship Royai.

Ed and Roy's jacket made me smile. And I'd like to apologize considering I always try to review each fic I read, but I've read a few others of yours and then lost internet, so I couldn't...

Anyways.

You've got a great hold on Roy and Ed's characters, and the parental!Roy you've written works quite well. What would be really entertaining would be to see the roles reversed, a Parental!Ed with Roy. But I don't even know how that could fit, so it doesn't matter.

Great job torturing Ed!

Sincerely,

Master of the Hellish Yard
Adhara.Elric chapter 4 . 9/26/2010
Hi, dear writer:

I found your history pretty small, sweet and awesome :33333 I really like it! Congratulations for your good work :D
stxrseekers chapter 5 . 8/5/2010
That was so sweet. I'm not a huge supporter of romance in FMA because it's hard to find well written Roy/Riza or Ed/Winry, which are the only two main pairings I support. (Other than Roy/Ed Parental) I don't support any yaoi in this fandom.

-breathes-

Okay, now the story - amazing. I don't usually read first person POV, but you made it worth reading. Well done; I'm deeply impressed. Good story idea, too.
TheChantalB chapter 5 . 8/25/2009
aw... poor edward...

i forgot this is a RoyAi story...

i was so engulfed at what happened to poor edward to remember its a RoyAi story...
demisemiquav3r chapter 5 . 2/10/2009
noo, it wasn't too sappy. i loved every bit of it! especially the part where ed was embarassed but still liked being held by roy, it was perfectly in character. ] you are amazing, and this story is amazing!
Orange Singer chapter 5 . 12/14/2008
Awesome! And I love Ed torture. I don't know why. For some reason I loved that short rant! Nice job!
Koibitotedare chapter 5 . 10/2/2008
nice. i'm pretty sure hawkeye IS the only one who knows the rules everyone else just relys on her...until they get shot...lol...
Vi chapter 5 . 5/22/2008
i loved this! its really well writen
Faoi Na Realtai chapter 2 . 2/4/2008
If you like Kingdom Hearts an torture read LV-chan and Brightshadow 5's time I checked they were having a contest to see who could turn Sora suicidal first.
Dark Reborn chapter 5 . 1/20/2008
This is a really good story! Thank you for writing this story! _
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