|Reviews for In Dreams|
| Irishbrneyes chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Beautiful! I love the imagery in this one! Love it, and I love this series!
| deanandjo4ever1 chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
That was awesome. I loved it, your really building their relationship,I can see it in my mind's eye.
| Thescarredman chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Really disappointed you're not still writing. This is good stuff.
| SpiritBox chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
Sigh, this one made me want to give Jayne a big ol' hug.
| canthereisto chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
aw, I loved that! "cause she knew she could kill him with her mathematical gun-shooting" hehe, you always get the humour in there somewhere. Loved that!
| RomanceGuru chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
I love how we get more insight into Jayne, and his past, which in turn explains why he fronts such a rough exterior. Also the essence of why Jayne is falling for River, the way she looks at him, like he matters. The way she reminds him of home.
“She weren’t scared of him, neither. Jayne realized it was probably ‘cause she knew she could kill him with her mathematical gun-shooting”
“She’d been through a hell of a lot for her age, and it mighta made her nuttier than a Christmas fruitcake”
| eg chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
very great! I like this style.
|Azamiko chapter 1 . 11/21/2005|
| Lystelle chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
I really, really liked this story. I liked the voice you used, it was much easier to be in Jayne's head using that style, I could hear him in my head. And good for you for trying something different, it's not easy writing in a different voice from your own.
You did really well getting into his character and showing that he was not completely shallow but also still Jayne.
| TheMusicalFruit chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Not sure what I make of the J/R pairing, but this is really well written. Good job with Jayne's POV.
| Shandrial chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Wow, nice little Jayne vignette! I've always wondered about the two. I mean, they are the only ones on the ship that don't have sweethearts. And well, Book doesn't exactly count, heh.
I like the way you portray Jayne's mind. Wonderful work.
| Grav chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Very *very* good.
*hustles off to lj to rec this to all her Jayne reading friends*
Really. Really good. I love how deep you've gone into his character here...and hers as well for that matter (although, the part where he had a good dad made me laugh because this is WhedonVerse and dads generally suck there).
| Elizabeth5 chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
So sweet, and so in character with Jayne. Thanks for not making him over-nice, but still giving him that depth we all suspect is lurking around. :)
| Wrenn8811 chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Very Excellent, I hope this becomes a series.
| Macbeth's Lady chapter 1 . 10/12/2005