Reviews for The Brothel
Nekia5047 chapter 6 . 6/30/2007
WOW THAT STORY WAS...WOW...IT WAS DEFINTILY SOMETHING. IT WAS INCREDIBLE:)THNX
shannygoat chapter 6 . 3/6/2007
I can dig it Dave...get your man on. Great job. Sorry not much of a real review, sick w/ the flu and the words ain't coming out.

xoxoxo

Shanny
shannygoat chapter 5 . 3/6/2007
I'm willing to lay my bets on Lilian. Just because I don't like that bitch...gotta read the last chapter to see if I'm right.

xoxoxo

Shanny
Areya Branxton-Chase chapter 6 . 9/12/2006
Kind of reminds me of Law and Order SVU I loved it.
jensensgirl chapter 6 . 4/26/2006
Ouch you kinky bitch! Hanging by his balls? Is that possible? 250 lbs being held up by ball skin? I'm with John and Chavo, I laughed.

Great story and they know Dave or he's a frequent visitor?
TakerTakeMe chapter 6 . 3/5/2006
Wow, this story was A-MAZ-ING! LOL! I mean, this story just blew me away...in six chapters! Needless to say, I loved it, and I MUST know what happened in that room with Batista, Stephanie, Trish, and Victoria... Man, this story was great! :-)
Breeface chapter 6 . 2/23/2006
I love how you made the wrestlers into detectives! Thats so cute! I loved this story! Good job sweetie!

xAubreyx
Sweet Steffie chapter 6 . 1/4/2006
Hahaha. Well well well, we have reached the end of the story. It was quite a ride. You might want to add a bit more detailing between dialog in the future, but overall I am impressed. You are one author to keep an eye on. has been overrun with newbies that kind of bored us veteran authors away, but you are one to keep me here. Good job
Sweet Steffie chapter 3 . 1/4/2006
Honestly, I find the way the detectives were laughing and talking to each other was very unproffesional. But for the rest it was "interresting" to say the least. I am still intrigued, lets continue
Sweet Steffie chapter 2 . 1/4/2006
Ok, its a bit out there, and most of the scene seems really rushed. Trowing me a bit off, but I still liked it. Interesting tale
Sweet Steffie chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Interresting start. A bit short, could use more detailing when using dialog. But none the less, I liked it. I am quite intrigued.
TrishOrton chapter 6 . 11/12/2005
I KNEW IT! i knew lilian did i was alil off as to y she did it but i was still right! lol anyway this was a great story im just sorry it took so long for me to read it but better late then never eh anyway i totally fell in love with this and i hope to see something like it in the near future :)
TrishOrton chapter 5 . 11/12/2005
damn there al lying that means it was LILIAN! lol sorry but i know it was her. she has the biggest motive of all it was her brothel that would have been closed. anyway cant wait to read the last chapter :)
TrishOrton chapter 4 . 11/12/2005
Im really getting into this story lol but i have to know why Trish and Steph lied, what r they trying to hide? i guess i'll find out in the next chapter :)
TrishOrton chapter 3 . 11/12/2005
damn anal? that sounds really painful i dont care how much u like sex lol anyway i liked Trish's part i just hope she didnt kill Randy anyway great chapter and i forgot to say that i love the word sadomachist lol it just sounds funny to me
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