Reviews for Snowy Fire
xxdarkvampireangelxx chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
good prologue can't wait to read more hope you write more:):):)
Sakural7865 chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Sounds neat! MORE!
EleganBlack chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
I want to know what happens next !

Isabees chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
hehe. good start, but your usage of words seem to need improvement. Like "His words seem to be entering my spine" (or something like that.) If your character is facing Hao, why would his words enter her spine? It sounds kinda wrong. :) Hope I helped

Lovlian chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
aw... That was soo cute! Good start! Keep on going ;D
Devilis Kyuu chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Nice fic although too short. XD Mind to update soon? Err...and please make it longer PLEASE!
Mei Marino chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
It's getting interestng... keep up the good work ne? And make it longer next time onegai!
devilicious-jo chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
interesting...though short.. might want to make it longer... but good nevertheless!

update soon! i love HaoxOC!
Calliope's Inspiration chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
so far so good update soon!
hasu713 chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
looks good, only unfortunatley very short, but can be logical in a prologue... update soon! VERY SOON!
Phoe.nyxus chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
hm ... I AM interested! :D really, it sounds cool, hope you'll update soon, ne ? I like your writting style

- Sima-chan