Reviews for On The Run
RochyWins chapter 1 . 8/22
wow awesome.
Lance chapter 53 . 8/12
OH MY GOD!. I LITERALLY JUST READ A REVIEW BY AND I'VE NEVER BEEN MORE HAPPY THAT THEY HAVE A CHANCE OF SURVIVAL I CAN ALREADY SEE THE SMILING FACES OF THERE FRIENDS WHILE THERE IN THE HOSPITAL BEDS TOGETHER AND THE STAY OF EVERYTHING IN CINDYS HOUSE IS PROOF THAT SOMETHING IFY WAS GOING ON AND SURE THERES THE ONE OFFICER WHO GOT KILLED BUT IM SURE EVERYTHING EILL WORK OUT FOR EVERYONE THANK YOU FOR THE STORY THAT REALLY DIDN'T END YET FOR THE UNIVERSE THIS STORY TAKES PLACE IN I HOPE TO ONE DAY SEE A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY OBOUT JIMMY AND CINDY WITHOUT ALL THE VIOLENCE AND FOCUSING ON ROMANCE. IF YOU EVER WRITE A SEQUEL SET IT THE MOMENT THIS ONE ENDED IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY.
Lance chapter 53 . 8/12
YOU! MOTHER! FUCKER! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO RUIN THE STORY BY KILLING THEM! YOU COULD HAVE BEEN KIND AND GIVE PEOPLE A HAPPY ENDING! AFTER ALL THEY'VE BEEN THROUGH YOU KILL THEM!? JUST AS HORRIBLE AN ENDING AS THE LET ME IN FANFICTION AND SOUTH PARK STYLE FANFICTION! AND THEY WERE EVEN LONGER THAN THIS! IM NOT HAPPY THE FIRST FANFICTION I READ BY YOU WAS THIS! I EVEN FEEL LIKE CRY MY EYES OUT! It's going to be a LONG time before I ever read another one of your story's and I pray I read the romance with a happy ending:'(TT). I'm sorry its just sad you had to end it like this after all they've been through. After all I've been through I've only just turned 18 a few months ago and I read this in to day it's literally 3:48 AM and I'm supposed to go to school soon:-(... I don't know why you did this ending out of all the other possible ending I could see coming YOU NEVER WROTE AN AUTHOR'S NOTE AT THE END OF THIS!:-( I got to get some sleep or read (Billy and Mandy of the night) or read more Danny phantom story's where Dani is Danny and Sam's biological daughter I hope (God save the queen) has that. And I believe (I walk the line) is going to reveal that soon. You could look those stories up on this site if your interested other than that I wish you the best of luck and that you should not stop writing stories. I'm still so sad though.
boyscouts83712 chapter 53 . 6/3
Great Job

R.I.P Cindy and Jimmy.
boyscouts83712 chapter 21 . 6/3
Great Job so far. RUN JIMMY AND CINDY, RUUNN!
midnightscar17 chapter 53 . 10/5/2015
What a rotten ending fuck it all to hell
DanDrake chapter 53 . 5/12/2015
0_0 dark ending...
Lauren chapter 53 . 2/22/2015
Damn this was crazy dude! I read the whole thing from start to finish. I couldn't picture jimmy and Cindy doing this but awesome story! Seriously amazing imagery and I was honestly at the edge of my seat! You should write a novel
goldenflash100 chapter 53 . 12/5/2014
Such a sad story! But I love how you ended it; greatly written. Thanks for writing such a great story that I was able to read! :3
Dr.Guest chapter 53 . 9/9/2014
Me again. Sorry. I just love you so much. It must've annoyed you so much that no one got your ending. I counted though! They're were fifteen for Jimmy and it says Cindy emptied the gun.
Sweet Cabbages, you're stinkin' awesome. Just. I can't even. I am fangirling over this story.
I'm sorry.
I'm probably creepin you out.
Wow.
Dr.Guest chapter 53 . 9/9/2014
And they pulled the triggers...
And the guns went 'click click I'm all out of bullets, you little shits'!
THAT WAS AWESOME! You have to really read closely to realize there's no more bullets in the chambers! I love you so much. I will give you a pearl. ( ")
I love how so many people didn't get it. They were all out of ammo! Haha, I can't get over that. You are fantastic.
raven chapter 53 . 8/5/2014
hi agian...i just reread the ending my god its great!
raven chapter 53 . 7/20/2014
omg...that is so sad...BUT THAT WAS THE BEST JINDY/AVENDTURE IVE EVER ending ...god the ending, it had a romeo and julet ending but that was so much better when they said "i love you"
to each other (oh btw spoilers)and that saint jimmy...nice touch :).and the fact that there 11 just makes so much more better. and at first look i didnt read it because it had 53 chapters but once i read it the story poilt god i...i couldnt help but to fall in love with it!i mean sure it had blood in it but that all the more realistic ! and my god jimmy that plan was brillant! and man...is it sad i like the ending this much, I mean its so prefect we all cant say we saw this coming! well in my my most truthful words..they should have and then shot or in a hug, but hey this ending work just as great...no in fact better! love ur work dont stop this amazing writing style u have and as always ALLONIZ! :3
jindyandpercabethlover4ever chapter 5 . 7/13/2014
so are they boyfriend and girlfriend?
CartoonChaos chapter 31 . 5/21/2014
I forgot to write this review before so here it is now:
holy crap! this is so intense, and barbaric, and badass all at the same time!
Go Sheen go! and everyone else...
Long Live Jimmy Neutron!
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