|Reviews for On The Run|
| Lauren chapter 53 . 2/22
Damn this was crazy dude! I read the whole thing from start to finish. I couldn't picture jimmy and Cindy doing this but awesome story! Seriously amazing imagery and I was honestly at the edge of my seat! You should write a novel
| goldenflash100 chapter 53 . 12/5/2014
Such a sad story! But I love how you ended it; greatly written. Thanks for writing such a great story that I was able to read! :3
| Dr.Guest chapter 53 . 9/9/2014
Me again. Sorry. I just love you so much. It must've annoyed you so much that no one got your ending. I counted though! They're were fifteen for Jimmy and it says Cindy emptied the gun.
Sweet Cabbages, you're stinkin' awesome. Just. I can't even. I am fangirling over this story.
I'm probably creepin you out.
| Dr.Guest chapter 53 . 9/9/2014
And they pulled the triggers...
And the guns went 'click click I'm all out of bullets, you little shits'!
THAT WAS AWESOME! You have to really read closely to realize there's no more bullets in the chambers! I love you so much. I will give you a pearl. ( ")
I love how so many people didn't get it. They were all out of ammo! Haha, I can't get over that. You are fantastic.
| raven chapter 53 . 8/5/2014
hi agian...i just reread the ending my god its great!
| raven chapter 53 . 7/20/2014
omg...that is so sad...BUT THAT WAS THE BEST JINDY/AVENDTURE IVE EVER ending ...god the ending, it had a romeo and julet ending but that was so much better when they said "i love you"
to each other (oh btw spoilers)and that saint jimmy...nice touch :).and the fact that there 11 just makes so much more better. and at first look i didnt read it because it had 53 chapters but once i read it the story poilt god i...i couldnt help but to fall in love with it!i mean sure it had blood in it but that all the more realistic ! and my god jimmy that plan was brillant! and man...is it sad i like the ending this much, I mean its so prefect we all cant say we saw this coming! well in my my most truthful words..they should have and then shot or in a hug, but hey this ending work just as great...no in fact better! love ur work dont stop this amazing writing style u have and as always ALLONIZ! :3
| jindyandpercabethlover4ever chapter 5 . 7/13/2014
so are they boyfriend and girlfriend?
| CartoonChaos chapter 31 . 5/21/2014
I forgot to write this review before so here it is now:
holy crap! this is so intense, and barbaric, and badass all at the same time!
Go Sheen go! and everyone else...
Long Live Jimmy Neutron!
| CartoonChaos chapter 53 . 5/21/2014
What the hell man?! This got so dark so quickly! Holy Crap!
Still a nice fic i guess...
not really my style though... need something a bit more happy... but ill see what else you got...
| logzsm chapter 53 . 5/19/2014
| Matt chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
I click the chapters and i'm like HOLY PLUTO! Good one though.
| trololol123 chapter 53 . 6/10/2013
Well, I guess I'll just have to imagen that there's a heaven and that somhow, after all they did, they'll go there and live happy :') but still, the others will suffer in jail and... ya, please consider an alternit ending, PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEE!
| trolol123 chapter 53 . 6/10/2013
YOU BETTER MAKE AN ALTERNIT ENDING!
it was so dam good till they fucking died!
and there's so many questions un answered, please make a happy ending, I can't sleep now :(
| Trololol123 chapter 53 . 6/9/2013
I hate you, I thought it was going to be a happy ending, ur too good of a writer :( why couldn't it be happy?! Now I'm not gonna be able to sleep!
| trololol123 chapter 18 . 6/9/2013
HA! u said that she through the wallet away and kept the 10 bucks :P loooool
looking really good other wise, i'm hooked, got an exam tmrow, but don't care :P