Reviews for Capture
Nefar chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Just give it up. Seriously. Take a grammar lesson or two, and a lesson in sentence structure. Good luck, but you can forget the story. Try again.
DB-Explorer chapter 2 . 7/11/2006
its ok, but your writing could improve, its much to liner, no insight into what they are thinking, good start though. 3/5
korrd chapter 2 . 7/1/2006
Good fic. Have SG-1 escape and then commandeer the Millenium Falcon. That would be funny. Also its not O'Neal but O'Neill. Ok just to clear that up. Update soon.
jarno chapter 2 . 6/8/2006
updatre soon i like the crossing chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
your story seems interesting. I hope you continue.
Celtic Cross chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
This story is different. I personally don't think Luke would act this way, but who cares anyway? I like this story! Update SOON ok? OK!
P.P.M chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
I like it but, you could add more detail.-God bless
Natters chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
one nit pik, it's O'Neill. good start. more please