|Reviews for Past Action|
| Rae Roberts chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Good start, right away there is something to catch the reader's interest. Will definitely be back to read the next chapters!
| GrimSapphire chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
sounds goo dcant wait to read more
| Angelique Sauvegarde chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Already built a lot of suspense. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Minor quibble. It's spelled Excalibur.