Reviews for Out of Order
TheDevilsLovingBitch - STAYING chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
I think it doesn't have enough reviews cause you don't make the end - I understood perfectly - clear enough for most people. I've found with my writing you sometimes literally got to spell it out for readers.
heathersnape5 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
This was really nice, keep it up :) you really had some emotion going, you did quite well.
adavisa chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
I don't understand how this could only have two reviews. It's wonderful! I wanted to crawl into the story and hug him! Excellent work!
Megan Consoer chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
SilverShiver chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Does this story really not have any reviews? That's odd becasue I really liked it... I love the ending, it's so beautiful. And, since Dnape is like my favorite character of all time, it speaks for one of his many fan-fiction persons.