The description was fantastic. I think that description is better than action sequences. It tends to be easier to understand.

Wow. This is really unique. I love stories like this. :)

This is a good story. I like how Dark Link examined everything around him in the temple. Although, I don't understand how he was sent back in time when Ganondorf was defeated. And is he going to meet Link later?

Thanks for your review ) And yes, it does seem pretty plausible, eh? I'm surprised I was the first of my friends to make a solid case in the name of Purlo (the STAR man) being Tingle-like... and yes, Purlo is his official name.

As for your story: I am REALLY enjoying it (the first two chapters made me "emo" xD, hehe). I just kept on reading it, even though I'm uh... late for something now

Ooh, this is really interesting. I relaly like this... though I liked it rather better when he was an adult.

Now I feel awful for killing Dark Link. (

I hope he and Link meet up soon! Oh, and a Ganondorf and Dark Link confrontation would be cool...

Keep writing! This is great!

Ganondorf, you brilliant man! A REFLECTION! Better than making a phantom Link, I say!

...And Ganondorf's sexy, too. _

I loved it. Absolutely amazing. I waited for this one for quite a while. But you know. It was just...perfect. I wonder...who will he meet next? Malon? Or Link himself? Goodness, what would that be like? Strange...Great job. Sk.

Ok very interesting story. Please update.

What exactly happened to Dark Link? He regained his time just because the other Link did? And I gotta know, are you gonna have them meet? (I think that would be interesting...) I love how you discribed everything in this chapter, I had to tap into my memory and imagination to fully get it (But it's not a bad thing! .) Can't wait for more!

Yes, I think this chapter is definitely better with the pronouns/name balance. Very sweet chapter, it's very cool to see the world through his clueless eyes! update soon, hopefully!

I'm pathetic.. when you described the ant I sat there wondering what the heck you were talking about and then when I read that it was an ant...I felt pretty stupid lol. Then again I have a legitimate excuse...I have a headache...heh...

I liked that chapter. It was pretty cool going through Dark Link's experiences when he was seeing things he'd never seen before. Yup .

Aw, the fight is so heart-rending. The vivid description of his leg bones crunching really made me feel for Dark Link...

Link himself seems almost brutal here, it puts a whole new twist on things and I like it!

Ooh, sorry to bug you about the pronouns again, but it is something of a problem. Especially avoid using the person's name two times in the same sentence, like here: "Turning, Link walked away from the only enemy Link regretted to fight." It would really be better to rephrase it like: "Turning, Link walked away from the only enemy he regretted to fight."

Sorry if I seem like a grammar snob or anything... but I really like your ideas and just hope you can present them a bit better. I must know what happens next! And so I will put this story on my Alerts list! :D

keep writing the next chapter!

I loove Dark Link's exploration of the world around him, it seems so innocent and sweet somehow... sigh.

Eh, This may seem a bit picky of me to say so, but you use the words "Dark Link" a lot. At least 30 times. Try using more pronouns and avoid starting quite so many sentences with Dark Link. I know it's hard but it'll make the sentence structure of your story flow a lot better.

Anyways, a very interesting story so far and Dark Link seems so sweet, especially with the bit about killing.

Onwards!

Heyy, I like this so far! The train of his thought is written so well, it actually seems pretty natural. Onwards to the next chapter!

Oh you! You took my idea... joking well..no I'm not but oh well I guess thats what I get for writing the whole story first THEN posting it. Well anywayz cooll chapter your giving me much insperation! I'll Be looking forward to the next chapter!