Reviews for Beginnings
flapjacks chapter 2 . 1/12/2008
great story, please update soon!
Fading Letters chapter 2 . 4/21/2006
And again it's me. I already read chapter 1 some weeks ago, but i didn't notice that there was a 2nd chapter so i had to read now. It's really good and I so much like your stories!
Greggo's Gal chapter 2 . 1/8/2006
I have always kinda been a Jimmi/Kirsten shipper so to read a story about them together is great! Also to read about Kirsten's abortion is something different. It seems to be something that the writers have forgot they mentioned. This is story is so well written that I can definatly see something like this happening on the show.

Great Story!
kandylover1 chapter 2 . 11/13/2005

This is adorable! I love it soo much! You are a great writer. I think you should hold off on Kirsten telling Sandy about the abortion. Please write again soon. :)
SandyKirsten chapter 2 . 10/17/2005
This is so good. Please continue. You write beautifully.
MissSwede chapter 2 . 10/16/2005
thanks so much for deciding to cotinue this story...

i loved how you put the evening through Sandys eyes as well... it is just so sweet when he is beeing insecure...

about the abortion...I don't think it is something that she would just come out and say but i do think that if you could find some smooth way of working it into the story before they get to serious it would still be realistic... but if you don't that is ok too cause that would mean a longer fic...jipi..P

I am already waiting for the next chapter...and if you could bring in a jealous Jimmy or Rebecca that would be great... but always Kandy in the end...
FoxyWombat chapter 2 . 10/16/2005
Personally, I think you should hold off on telling about the abortion. This is a big thing for her and while she and Sandy have the love at first sight thing going on, I don't think she'd spill her guts to him completely. Great chapter though!
SexyEm chapter 2 . 10/16/2005
aw great update was so sweet and fluffy, really loved it!poor sandy thinking he didnt stand a chance with kirsten. I loved him trying to think cold shower thoughts made me laugh, and the end so sweet, i really think you should continue cos i really am loving this fic. great work
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 2 . 10/15/2005
oh oh oh



Love it

I could read it over and over, so glad it's not a oneshot. Write more, write lots!

It flows like I wish my Berkeley story would.
CynthiaB chapter 2 . 10/15/2005
Aww, so good, so good!

I love Berkeley's stories (I don't know if I already said that).

It was really sweet.

Oh, and I'd preffer her to tell Sandy about the abortion later, only if that means you're going to write a longer fic, hahah.

Keep up the good work. And sorry for the lenght of the review.
Andy Panddy chapter 2 . 10/15/2005
Great story... Please, continue!

Update soon!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
oh cool

Really well written

Write again soon!
MissSwede chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
i really loved this story...i like the way you ended Kirsten and Jimmy very realistic. although i am hoping for a continuation to see the development between Kirsten and sandy...that would be great...
CynthiaB chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
It was really good!

Great work.
FoxyWombat chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
I like this a lot...good job!
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