|Reviews for It's the duty of a ninja!|
| the grey mage chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
this is some what difficult to follow. the changing scenes and different character dialog lines confuse me.
| the grey mage chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
goodness, was this when you were just starting out?
| Shi no Akai Tsume chapter 14 . 4/21/2010
Awesome story man, seriously. The whole thing was interesting, and I liked how you made the fox background with the girls. Its sad that somebody has to die though seriously. either ending is sad for them, man I was hoping you would do a third where Naruto gets both just so someone won't die.
Oh yeah, the epilouge is cool, you should contiue it.
| ShikallllTema chapter 7 . 12/4/2007
u fail as a writer
| Elemeffayoh chapter 14 . 6/27/2007
what no more?~? and hell ya im gonna read the bushin scroll xD
| Elemeffayoh chapter 13 . 6/27/2007
sweet but who is the dude
| Elemeffayoh chapter 12 . 6/27/2007
oh man sasuke sure is smart
| Elemeffayoh chapter 11 . 6/27/2007
| Elemeffayoh chapter 10 . 6/27/2007
no no chills but it was good
| Elemeffayoh chapter 9 . 6/27/2007
| Elemeffayoh chapter 8 . 6/27/2007
kakashi does need to get a gf rin should come back
| Elemeffayoh chapter 7 . 6/27/2007
oh fuck this is good lol
| Elemeffayoh chapter 6 . 6/27/2007
how the hell are they everywehre they dont have super speed
| Elemeffayoh chapter 5 . 6/27/2007
| Elemeffayoh chapter 4 . 6/27/2007
yea how is it bushin?